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After the war part, everything pretty much seems rushed. And secondary char just doesnt seem existed anymore. Claudia's friend from different nation, the Principle and the watcher from the academy that said keep an eye of Nayla which at this point is just unnecessary plot. Claudia's father doesnt really do anything at all, and her brother no where to be seen after. Not to mention they never really found out the truth regarding the death of the mother/wife. Regis doesn't appear cause he got lock up so I guess i'm fine with that. The conclusion of this seems sloppy I'm guessing the author lose interest on the work that he just want to end it.
tbh even the war part seemed so rushed too. Instead of feeling the devastation and despair that war typically brings, I remember just being frustrated at the different plot points happening within a major arc. Like a 1-2 chapter build up, and then a different plot gets introduced and after 1-2 more chapters we return to the 'payoff' and then mostly forget about it
Like I thought there's more story to him with his deceased wife which related to Alicia. Now suddenly time skip 10 years with the children already grown up, like the pacing and build up doesnt match.