The narrative, the sequence is lame, dull
I mean, it's almost like a wattpad fic written by a teenager but in a manhwa
Honestly I was waiting for something more elaborated. Like man, the dark haired man knowledges that the mc is supposed to be a minor, he DOESN'T KNOW his actual age so idc that they're both adults, one of them thinks the other one is underage. And not only that, he forces himself over the "underage" while being drunk. Being drunk isn't an excuse, it's even more horrendous
And the censorship, it's too unsettling, too unserious
There are better stories than this one, it's a shame the art is involved in a not so good project
I must say that it kind of annoys me that the author draw the teach with very null facial expressions. I hoped he would be a little more surprised or shocked of how he discovered a new layer that he didn't see of Guwon. He kind of knew about because he heard of it, but he didn't saw it until now
Come on now, I think they considered that too but a lack of emotion on a characters face is not always a good choice. in this case the emotions weren't conveyed properly to the audience and that's totally okay, not every face or panel can be perfect art wise. This is just some constructive critique on the comic and facial expressions are a big part of comic writing. The artist often draws teacher twink very stiff which I think is something they could work on from an art perspective. Not everything is an artistic joice.
I had some kind of hope it would develope better but it's too wattpad and too sketchy for me. The MC is annoying, extremely pettit he's even tinnier and shorter than Sophie, the only girl we get to compare him to (in terms of mesurement). He's the one who's unrespectfull, like he was saved from falling and crashing his face against the ground. He dares to call the newbie giant clown and giraffee. He's the one being inappropriate. The poor guy just wanted indications, scared Liam by mere accident, saves him and gets insulted.
The faces are extremely femenine, all the boys look like girls with dicks. It's kind of uncomfortable for me. Not my cup of tea.
Judging by the narrative it's not gonna get better, the dialogues are very poor as the sequences. I don't recommend it unless you read it with your mind turned off or wanting to laugh at it at some point. It's better not to read it if you are too counscious or critical with how well developed is the plot and sequences.
I love Jenni BUT is must to admit that Lola is such a Queen, she ate, she delivered and she is such innate leader. I'm sad Jenni lost the conquest but it was kind of unavoidable, her freak doesn't really matches with the common students and Lola's is more attractive cause well she's very western like so it's a little more innovative and appealing
I hope Junhui brings something to the table, cause how dare you hide and leave Jenni all by herself?!
I give Lola the right to take revenge, like man you're such a coward, you even leave the girl you "like" suffer all alone









I'm wishing that this ends up as a polygamous relationship, they kinda deserve an end like that (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ