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The idea is great, the execution is bad but with very pretty art.
I saw someone said the novel is really good so I'm gonna try find it, cause they glossed over so much like what do you mean he still has sex with that other guy after the tennis game? (Unwillingly, yeah, what a fucking sleezeball.)
But did it really all boil down to they both thought the other was homophobic so that was why they didn't confess their feelings? Goddamn. That was so dumb cause he saw them kiss at the party??? Like I said, bad type of miscommunication, yo.
It was weirdly fast paced in the beginning, really had zero chemistry between the two even if he was faking it, but once the chasing arc started it got so much better and funnier. The Alpha actually reflected and became a better person though I wish it'd shown more of the struggle, it was still quite fast paced in that respect.
Definitely worth a read at least once.