The idea is great, the execution is bad but with very pretty art.
I saw someone said the novel is really good so I'm gonna try find it, cause they glossed over so much like what do you mean he still has sex with that other guy after the tennis game? (Unwillingly, yeah, what a fucking sleezeball.)
But did it really all boil down to they both thought the other was homophobic so that was why they didn't confess their feelings? Goddamn. That was so dumb cause he saw them kiss at the party??? Like I said, bad type of miscommunication, yo.
It actually hurts trying to read this with all the background panels repeating, can someone tell me if it's like that the entire time? I got up to chapter 6 n just can't continue
Nevermind, it is like that the entire way through, which is bad enough but then they reuse the exact same panels just with different speech which would honestly be absolutely fine if it didn't get jumbled up with the background faded panels. Just use blank spaces, oh my god
It's annoyed me that much I actually want to go through and edit it out n reupload just to make it more coherent
bro, read with Multiple pages turned off. Its supposed to be read per pages and you tap the screen like a slideshow
tho if you just dont like the story ofc dont read this specifically. no pressure. but this repeating/slideshow format is way more common than you think
Yeah it's really irritating, I mean i can't focus... The format is weirder than story tbh
Ohhh it's read like that my head was hurting sm trying to read this
It was weirdly fast paced in the beginning, really had zero chemistry between the two even if he was faking it, but once the chasing arc started it got so much better and funnier. The Alpha actually reflected and became a better person though I wish it'd shown more of the struggle, it was still quite fast paced in that respect.
Definitely worth a read at least once.