Oh my god THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT DRAGGING IT ON and giving us the win and that Dan is in the clear in one update. Ugh I hope everything is smooth sailing from here ;(
I think that's the fastest ive ever read a chapter. Like i didn't want to look but i just wanted to know hes safe. Omg im so pissed. I hope jk ends that guy in the ring
I kept going back and forth Idk y. Like no! Tht ddnt just happen. So it was the longest chapter for me. I legit stayed on one page n was shocked got a glass of water n continued. （/TДT)/
Nooo i simply couldn't watch that. It was too painful
SOMEONE PLEEEEEASE reorder the chapters. I BEG. I will be so thankful!
The mods don't seem to care even though I've reported it. It's better to read it on a different site like Bato
Noted. Thanks so much!
Did we ever learn why Hayan was also kidnapped?
Also in the last chapter it seemed like the author was saying jinyoo won because Gyuhwool only occupied his brain for a 'mere' couple of months. If so, then what do you think happened in the main story ending. Was he imagining that gyuhwool was the cashier or what?
Gyuh-wool definitely kidnapped Jinyoo again. And Hayan was captured by Gyuh-wool as a practice test. She wasn't actually important to him
First, i see why someone will give this a 4, but I'll give it a 5.
Second, I actually enjoyed this a lot.
This story accomplishes something most stories lack: consistency. In most [BL]stories characters change over time and in a character development sort of way. Instead, they change to fit the story. It should be the way around. Just think of how many times you've reread a story and realized that the uke's personality was extremely different at the start (usually stronger). The characters in the story, while unusual, are very consistent throughout the story.
Third, the author delivered good dialogue and storytelling. While I don't base my reviews off the quality of the dialogue (because this is a translation), I would like to comment on it being very natural and genuine AKA very human they're not exaggerated characters. The storytelling was good too.
Fourth, my only complaint about the story is the 'second couple'??? Honestly, I really don't understand them. I feel like we didn't get a proper intro to the dude that looks like the stalker. Their placement was just very odd. I understand that they moved the story, but I wasn't connected enough to them to understand their impact. Again, they were just planted into the story weirdly.
Lastly, I really liked the art.
Conclusion: READ IT! It's not that long and it's good.
Maybe it's cuz i hate kids but i don't think so they didn't have a BIG part in the story, and the things Shizuku did were just extremely unrealistic but that still wouldn't make me rate it this low. However, my expectations MAY have played a role in this low rating.
It just didn't make me feel anything. Really. The art was a very inconsistent and bad that it took away from the story. It did get a little better in the 2nd volume.
Ik this isn't professionally translated so im not gonna judge the dialogue that hard, but it was cheap. The plot was cheap too. The characters weren't that strong either. I think the character with the most consistent personality was the mother in law. Overall very trope-y, expected, and not memorable.
Lastly, bad art = bad sex scenes. Did not feel a thing.
It's rare for me to say this but this was a wast of time and I don't recommend it unless stories about families and kids are your thing. Still, I think this was cheap.
I understand the messages in it, but the delivery just didn't make me feel anything.
An omega verse story doesn't just become good because the alpha is respectful of the omega. There are MANY things that contribute to the quality of a manga, and this one lacks a lot of them.
Then maybe because your eyes has problem that you didn't even read properly this masterpiece
I think you're the one who didn't read my review properly
Maybe I need to reread this? I just feel like they both told eachother I like you at diff points 10 times already??
I fell the same, especially Kim Dan, he Said that already a couple of times, If i remember correctly