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Chap 8 and homegirl is using Word for a magazine layout ?? does she like to suffer or is the author just unaware of what software to use
Was so focused on the story but that took me right out lol
Great art and story so far, though ! Can't wait to see Sara's reaction when she realizes Soojung is the one that'll be interviewing her.
Pacing is fine to me.
There a whole lot of shit to resolve, characters with actual moral depths and dilemmas, and the author has a story to tell that doesn't only revolve around romance.
As readers, I think we should get more used to stories that take actual time to explore and resolve drama. Instead of stories (like there are so many, take your pick) where tension is quickly resolved, because the sweet conclusion is the entire point, this one is about the way the tension holds and impact the plot and characters.
If you want a quick resolution instead of actual angst, I suggest you simply do not read this one.
I completely agree, ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I don't think readers need to "get used to" slow storytelling. Plenty of very slow stories are compelling. The question is whether the time spent actually develops the story or whether the narrative is treading water. As a writer myself, I've had to learn that distinction too: something can be important to the story I want to tell and still be boring in the way I'm currently telling it. "There's a lot left to resolve" explains why a story is long; it doesn't automatically make the pacing good.