It puts me off that AI is the character who holds up a mirror to the mc and pushes her to confront herself. And this type of characters are actually the ones who voice the reader's thoughts so they are important to us. The tension that builds as we read the story is relieved thanks to scenes like these. And I am not a chatbot. The author probably thinks this fits the character. Or perhaps as the story progresses and the MC draws closer to a normal emotional understanding she will realize that she can't depend a chatbot. She has to find the answers herself. I don't know...
I liked the author's storytelling style. They've found a nice rhythm without resorting to shortcuts. And capable about reflecting emotions without taking the easy way out. They manage to keep the story engaging. So I'd really like to read a redemption arc for Ml from this author. A good redemption arc isn't easy to find :D That's why althought 2nd Ml is cute I'm ready to sacrifice him for good story :D
The story isn't entirely without charm and art is nice, but the situation I mentioned below became tedious after a while.
They keep falling for the same types of tricks. It’s always the same internal dialogue: "Something isn't right here—something is off about this person blah blah"
Yet, they don't immediatly get out of there or they don't act different from the other times. İnstead, they keep stalling repatedly. Only they fall into the very same trap. And no thought given to taking long-term precautions after incidents. Everyone supposed to be extraordinary in demon sect but only in the name most of the time.
Repetition applies to emotional events as well. If I were to go into the details, this comment would become even longer
In my opinion, the story tries to justify the cliché while also trying to protect its originality. The author is saying, "If the brother was interested in the main girl without realizing she was his brother's wife, it wouldn't be so annoying, right?". AND I'm sure FL and ML will be veryyy understanding as we see in aaalll other shouju ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I will give this benefit of doubt but we will see...










"You're like some bouige 10-ply tissue paper... Super fancy BUT IN EVERYONE'S ASS"
This is "it" If I ever need to slut-shame someone in the future, this is the quote I will borrow