Man, we all read the same thing but clearly we have different interpretations; this is a toxic relationship but don’t act like it’s not fun to read. Some of y’all have read nastier shit with no substance. At the end of the day, it’s all fiction. Edit: it’s now been idk how many updates; I do not fw this n e more. It has been dropped. I must’ve been crazy when I originally wrote this comment









The art is totally fine, don’t really understand the complaints completely. You’re entitled to your own opinions with the art. I think not enough people have a problem with the writing in this. Whenever I read something, I never expect extraordinary story or even fully developed characters;; BUT the character motivations don’t make any sense in this story????? I don’t know how to describe it but the dialogue also feels unnatural(?) like more so than usual? I don’t know, but I feel like with a seasoned editor this story has a lot potential fr