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Was this chapter REALLY short, kind of, didn’t transition well from situation to situation, and then the strange faces.. is this the official chapter? Is the Artist okay?
tbh my thoughts exactly, nothing really happened in this chapter. It seemed like the sex scene was just thrown in there (no offense to the artist). The transitions threw me off too, I had to re-read some scenes.
There were a lot of loose ends that didn’t get tied up, like, did they ever find the medics records showing his brother caused his head trauma? Did he ever get his memories back? It was kind of implied his intelligence was coming back, but there was no actual follow up to that either? What was the brothers sentence? The end of this felt a little rushed, and honestly a little boring. It went from so many exciting plots and character developments to just mushy fan service.