... This feels so rushed?? I'm just reading the officials rn, but they fuckin' on ch.10 already, which...????? I feel like I'm experiencing whiplash, and not in a good way. If they (artist/author) had spent at least some time fleshing out each character's feelings - albeit I guess it'll happen now - I wouldn't have felt so weird about the whole thing.
I missed reading about clues - something that gave away their pining, going beyond superficially glancing at the other across the room once. Something that has to/should be specific to their dynamic. It just feels so washed up, which is a shame, since the art is scrumptious.
Remember how that guy at the FL who was notorious for dragging girls into dating rumors with him bc he’d like to use that to boost his social status?
Well the ML and her brother went out of their way to give that a lesson and the Ml was the one who was most “heated” about that encounter
Also for the ML he’s always been self conscious of the FL after she swore up and down his older brother was her crush. It’s explained later on but they both did things subtly against one another over the course of years. So it was like budding feelings if that makes sense.
As for the FL it seemed like her using the older brother crush thing was really just a rue to get closer to the ML lol
In conclusion they’re horny freaks
Not sure if I like this ngl. Is she his daughter? I suppose so. I'm guessing the money is for her mom, but really, a purse? Shouldn't you as a manager of marketing be able to get that by yourself? At that age, having to rely on your parent to buy you fancy stuff... never understood how people do that with a straight face. And I feel weird about him as well. Eh.
I've erased it from my "reading"-list. It's getting repetitive and the depth is so incredibly lacking, especially because it's the same spiel over and over again. Imagine someone being this way towards you, same sex or not. Smut scenes don't cover up a poor job at character building, even if you "take it slow" and "he'll work past it". He's already making mistakes, he's already hurting blondie, even if it's kind of brushed under the carpet by the RAMPANT horniness, smh. You don't always have to drag other people into a relationship to make clear how problematic a person is, and you sure as hell don't need it as a character building tool. Anyways, it's beyond what I can stomach, so imma drop it. Wish yall fun with the next chaps, hopefully shit is going to turn around! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧











Meet me outside behind the building - you need a talking to about private space and respecting it, ESPECIAKLY WHEN IT CONCERNS WOMEN, YOU MORON