Abbie1776's Topics (31)

Idk how to feel about this. I liked it enough to keep going, but this is definitely not something I'll revisit once I finish it.
I disliked the ml a lot, he’s not as horrible as some other red/black flag mls in stories I've read, but he is just not likeable. His whole personality is "I'm rich, out of touch and unbearably cocky", which isn't uncommon for these Cinderella tropps, but at least some of them had layers and you get to know/understand them better as the story progresses. But with him, that is literally all there is to him, not character development whatsoever.
And ngl mc really irritated me with how easily he got over his heartbreak and just forgave him (I'm a sucker for a ml that regrets his past actions a d grovels for forgiveness). The ml literally didn't have to work for the forgiveness and we don't even get to see him reflect that deeply on his shitty personality.
Also it doesn't make sense to me how he didn't recognize mc AT ALL and all of sudden he's saying that he was the one who shaped the type of ppl he was attracted to, like huh?
And then there's the mc's friend who was also in love with ml? I feel like there's just too much going on but the story is too surface level and never goes deep enough to the where it satisfies your curiosities as a reader.
Overall I don't hate the story, it's nice but that's all there is to it.

I just started this and the more I read the more I realized Asha ks literally the "y/n" we're making fun of on tiktok

It's a decent story but very shallow. I think the premise is nice and different from all the other reincarnation stories, but it's also not that deep, and not in a good way, meaning the story feels very empty, the characters aren't that well written/developed and major events are just skipped over.
The fml comes off as very selfish tbh, I understand she thought she was gonna die so she just did whatever she wanted, but I still think she could have been written in a way that doesn't make her come off as too pretentious, especially after she got cured and tried to get back on everyone's good graces, not that it made sense the way they just started hating her all of a sudden.
Also that Barron's daughter (I don't even remember her name) could have been developed more, I love a good foolish villainess, but I wish she had more thoughts behind those eyes than just "I'm better than her, therefore I hate her and I should take what's hers".
All in all, I've read better and more complex stories from 13yo wattpad writers, but this is just my opinion.

Omg so glad we won't have a whole misunderstanding arc just because of that dude love this

I like the story but it's sooo confusing. I can't tell if they're reminiscing or if it's the present. Hell I can't even tell who's pov we're reading sometimes. The art style is pretty good and their relationship isn't surface level so it makes their interactions genuine, but I can't keep up.
And when was Mc rejected??? Wasn't he the one who rejected Ml? I'm so confused and I don't feel like reading this anymore.

I hope the author sticks to short smut stories after this enda, because plots are clearly not their thing ╥﹏╥

There's bad art and then there's whatever the fuck this is. It's so bad in an esthetically pleasing way if that makes sense. Like I get the vibe they're trying to go for and I like the color palette, but damn it's executed so poorly.
It's not like it's a good read either so for me There's no saving it

I just wanna say, I'm part of LGBTQ community, and this my best friend Narita and he's an ally. Talk Narita
Narita (moat definitely): ALLY

I find myself reacting the same way as mort (▰˘◡˘▰) ooooh king Juliaaan~

The story is empty, barely any plot just sex, which isn't a bad thing except this isn't how it was sold to me, so I'm a bit disappointed there. If you just want with a cute couple, decent dynamic and no plot just sex, this might be for you.
Might be to your liking, but to me the art is throwing me off. The anatomy is kinda weird in some panels, their mouths look like they did the kylie jenner challenge and the veins look so freaking weird especially with their skin tones.
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