So I really enjoyed the characters. Even the plot of Act I was good. I totally feel like they should have held the ZDG competition as Act II instead of that other dude who was the 2nd "B". Seeing different teams and different little clashes would have been fun. I don't know, the plot was just underwhelming and not super thrilling! But still, a sweet read.
As an aside, I love how the car expanded to bedroom size just for the sex lol wtf.
I ended up rereading this and I don't remember if I posted this comment before but omg. My biggest peeve was the sister. Even now, I'm still completely shocked that she loved her father so much. He didn't even hide that he was a cunt to the MC. I guess I expected something, anything, from her about how her dad treated her brother...something! Like at the funeral when MC says sorry about YOUR father and she goes "our father" it's like she never actually grasped the type of swine the dad was and is trying to put her and MC on the same familial level and is ignorant to the poor treatment of the MC. Just wish she wasn't part of the story. Ok I'm sorry I just wrote a wall of text. I just had to let my feelings out.
What up with the big bro (and Chris)? I always get this jittery antsy feeling in my stomach when a story shows a sibling or parent has like little to no care for the related person(s) and get pissed when they're just happily living life lmao. I know it may not directly correlate with this story but I had to get this off my chest somewhere









So I really enjoyed the characters. Even the plot of Act I was good. I totally feel like they should have held the ZDG competition as Act II instead of that other dude who was the 2nd "B". Seeing different teams and different little clashes would have been fun. I don't know, the plot was just underwhelming and not super thrilling! But still, a sweet read.
As an aside, I love how the car expanded to bedroom size just for the sex lol wtf.