she takes advantage of his adopted dad and the ML she is so stupid I understand she knows the novel but she is not smart enough to know that the story is not the same anymore because of her still thinking about the characters of the novel she so frustrated FL ugh I guess I just wait for to finish to read the end ...
I liked this it was straight forward the story didn't take that along and the characters were well develop it was a nice read.... thank you for your hard work I enjoy it :)
I like a happy ending I wish a could see Blair and Watson get married a have a kid together but well, I enjoyed it. thks for your hard work :)
how can they live a child abandon for so long in that tower I don't think the story justifying t the reason for this Action also the brother didn't do nothing to protect his little sister and the father so easy give a child that already love regardless of her unic powers I don't the know the plot is not complete there to put together missing a lot a gaps in the story....
I also think they should've dealt better with leaving her there... but they did think she was with her bio father and living a lavish life there... it's one of those I dont agree but understand situations... at least is better than most where she'd be sent there for "causing her mother's death"...
first of I don't like the ML he so dense it gets in my nerves also the FL should tell him this- Ive been waiting for 10 yrs for you to proposed but out of a sudden you see different sides of me now you decide to look at me on different way - she doesn't tell him nothing also she gets to the orphanage and see them together having fun together with the children and he's so stupid to notice how she feels and she doesn't say nothing either they both get in my nerves I just can't the FL needs needs some pride and the ML go FCK yourself you don't deserve the FL ugh so mad about where this is going ......
well the translation is not so great and the story is dragging to much, the ML is not good to her, he punish her just because he's jealous instead of help her first and sulk later he rather being in pain and in danger and the FL is ok I guess but is no development or romance enough in the story.
I like the drama and the romantic story of this story they look good together also I like the happy ending. It was a nice read. Thanks for your hard work :)
a good short story I liked it :)