As a novel reader, I kinda wished the abyss era didn’t end because it was so interesting . I can’t lie but after they exited the abyss and was js revenge, it became boring to me...the seggs was good though (I did skip a few scenes because I wanted some interesting actions).
Ooo what chapter are we at novel-wise? I'm interested in spoiling myself
Ch 16 & 17
Thank you!
Where do you read it!?
Someone commented in the comment section a link to the site!
I still prefer they get out of there even if the story shift into revenge arc. The abyss is nowhere decent for anyone to live permanently. I do wish they could freely travel back and forth to actively fights abyss influence though.
The world building was so good and more interesting though. I do agree that it really couldn’t be liveable but the abyss sure is full of mystery that I wanted them to dig down more into it instead
Am I the only one who understood that this is supposed to be confusing? I think the author wrote it this way is because there are a lot of transmigrators now. The mushroom author literally wrote the original plot to be just full of smut because it’s a “fanfiction” but then some transmigrators changed the plot midway causing it to have so much stuff going around. This is like a collab of two authors but with different writing style and plot in mind that they are basically fighting for the fucking keyboard
Ohh that actually makes sense. The demon just adding thsse additions is ruining the flow of the story!! Dam smart girl
Yep it would be hilarious if this was the actual problem in the writing of this too
THANK YOU, I literally can never stay in the comment section too long because of everyone complaining about the story being exactly as advertised. It's like reading a time travel comic and getting upset because it's confusing to have multiple timelines. Like, BROTHER. The chaotic fan fiction is gonna be cliche and chaotic, that's the point I shouldn't crash out, maybe I'm hormonal
Exactly
No, you are so valid. I couldn’t take it as well while reading the comment section so I had to drop a piece of my mind since no one seemed to get as to why this story is confusing af. It’s confusing because it was written to be confusing. Maybe if they wanted to have a straight forward plot then they should read the og story because this is a fanfiction obviously
Theres an og story??
Not literally. This book is a fanfiction, so basically there is an og story of the fanfiction
Oh lol i was like theres an original for this?? Lmao
I marinated it sm that the art style turned sm like ai
I’m crying...this is the first time I am actually not rooting for the ml, and the mc to end. Please revive Jin, and let my baby Silon have his happy family, and Jun to have his freedom, and good family, and environment
Why does good, wholesome story, especially the ones without grape ends so damn quick while those shitass fucking bitch stories have over 70–100 chapters?
LITERALLY
I knew he’d get so much hate lmao. Made me feel so much better after reading it. Even his past couldn’t cover up how shtty kyoya is for me
If the kid, and Banther dies, I am kms. I don’t care about them lookin’ ahh y/n build characters to be honest.
It seems like a lot of y’all don’t understand Yejun’s character. In my opinion, Yejun is the most realistically written character out of everyone in the story, because first of all, as stupid as it may look like, his decision to take up that oldie’s offer was to protect his son.
The ml never told him anything. He rather kept everything to himself, even if the mc gave so many chances for him to open up. "Mc is so stupid, why would he take the offer?" Maybe because he is powerless? Just like Ian’s mother, Yejun was powerless, and in his perspective, his son could suffer more than he already is. He overheard the doctor, and Ian talking about his son, but not fully. He didn’t ask Ian anything about it despite the curiosity, because he knows the ml won’t reveal anything. Then came that ugly ahh mf, and planted wrong things to manipulate him.
Noah has always had the weak mind, he is easily swayed, and manipulated, that is why Ian was able to get him to marry him (not yet, but he agreed to the proposal). If you heard something that lacks context, and another person comes to fill in the blanks, of course you will piece it up together, and in this case, was a wrong information, Noah is bound to misunderstand the situation. Grandpa told Noah that Ian’s purpose was to offer his child as his replacement in the experiment, and also told him that why would the ml decide to turn 180° personality on him that quick, when five years ago, he was tossed aside like a whore from the red district. Noah already had trauma, and severe trust issues to the ml, and let’s not forget about how many times he graped him using their bond, and pheromones.
Noah agreed to the operation in return, the grandpa will not touch his son. That is why that old man said that Noah, and Ian had the same brain problems, because both chose to protect the child (he wouldn’t understand that of course since he is a shitty father).
If you put yourself in Noah’s shoes—a broke, helpless omega between a powerful dominant alphas father, and son, he is nothing. He couldn’t even afford the child’s medicine, and had to settle for the cheap ones that was why his son was experiencing drawbacks. If y’all had a son, and your only blood family at that, you are bound to protect that child even if it hurts you. Mc stayed for his child, and even tossed aside his feelings, because all he wanted was for his son to be well. And the ml can help him with that, but what if that helps suddenly turned into a betrayal? Because in his perspective, the ml was to sacrifice his son as a replacement.
This story is annoying, yes, because they don’t know how to communicate, especially Ian. Noah tried to reach out a lot of times, but Ian didn’t even say anything to him, nor did he reveal his sacrifice as an experiment in return to leave alone their son. If only they communicated (that block head grapist), then this story would end up not so angsty, and full of bullshits, because honestly, we are just going in circles.
I honestly empathize, and heavily sympathize for Noah. He just want a happy family. He just want to protect his son, but he couldn’t even do so, because he is up with some big shots. I hate the father, and son, but yeah, Ian can be tolerated I guess. He is a grapist tho, so he remains negative in my opinion bar. I better see some chasing arc, because all he did was do whatever he wanted in this story, and that pisses me fucking off. The second male lead is much better, and I better not hear y’all coming at me for this. Yehyun is better than Ian, end of discussion. Fuck you if you don’t agree with me
i didnt even read all of what you wrote cause it was longer than ml’s dick but i believe you
I've read it all and I agree with you word for word. I guess people here are too young to understand Noah's concerns and strugglings to put themselves in his shoes.
I giggled, sorry
Just annoys me how they coming at to Noah for basically being such a good father to his son. The least they can do is read the damn story with open eyes.
I defend this uke always, the ML IS FUCKING STUPID he's insecure but then would use pheromones to manipulate uke's body. I too, would get rid of the bond if ML use his pheromones to try to control me.
Plus, the ML talked so lowly about omega and beta, their first meeting is RAPE, and the uke already had a plan to get rid of the bond since long time ago? So why not take the offer, it's free and from the best Korean hospital
Exactly!! These people acting like that damn alpha didn’t grape him multiple times, like OMG? Read it again, damn. I would severe the bond too, if me, and my partner’s night bond is GRAPE, and not make love.
I agree with all of this. As annoying as the story has been, and as frustrating as the lack of communication is, I recognise that Noah was really stuck. He wants to protect his child, which is absolutely understandable. If Ian won’t communicate with Noah then he had to make the best decision he could in the moment. I’m actually happy that Noah finally has some agency back.
I just want Ian begging and pleading and actually treating Noah decently. I want a proper chasing arc and redemption for him before they are reunited.
EXACTLYYYYY. even though it annoys me how little they communicate, none of that can be pushed onto noah . He has no first hand experience with how loving other people say do-yoon(?) is, so of course he wouldn't trust when other people tell him such; especially when do-yoon has done nothing but close himself off from noah and ??? half the times they had sex in this was against noah's will.
since the beginning, noah has been saying he's doing everything to protect his child. He has no reason to trust do-yoon, and when someone comes into the picture and manipulates him into believe that do-yoon is doing something that will harm the one person he's trying to protect, of course he'd likely fall for it . We cannot be forgetting that Do-yoon found Yejun and made the bond sound like a burden right off the bat as well.
Fuck the mc, fuck the ml, fuck the author for writing this shit, fuck everyone except the raon. The mc suck, the ml suck, the author suck, everyone suck. I wish I could say every bad curses because this story suck so much. What a waste of a potential story and art style if only he ended up with the second ml. What was the point of them building up romance and chemistry if you’re just gonna throw it away to force a “happy ending” with the ml? All they do was fuck anyway. Why is he even alive if the cure was his horn? Dawg, after bro was poisoned, they’ve been fucking and I had to skip so many scenes. The only good shit the mc did was let raon name him. I miss my raon, my raon deserves better, he needs his own happy ending, and oml I hope a God could see how mad I am rn as I write this comment and reincarnate me in this story just so I could give my raon the love, support, and everything good because he deserves the world. I will save his mother, we will live somewhere peaceful and catch fishes by the river, go home when the sun starts to set and I will cook for him and after we fuck after dinner we’ll be stargazing and we will share the sweetest kiss under so many stars. I will love raon from the deepest mud of the earth to the farthest star of the universe. I don’t care about everyone in this story, I only continued because of my man raon, the mc and ml can go fuck themselves until they die for fuck sake I might write some fanfic for myself to reduce this hatred and pity that I am feeling and to just give my raon a happy ending. I love him so much I might become sick
valid asf
Not the Roan fans still barking