The characters are so flat, I couldn't even finish it. I wish more authors would be more flexible with personalities. Like we didn't even get how to see how the Top developed feelings for the bottom. We have too much bad stories with good art.
Can someone explain to me why Jake and shin was looking at the next car?
if i remember correctly jake put a camera in the car to watch shin
Oh so they just freaky then lol
I was going to complain how this kind of felt off for me, but then I felt the urge that I have to give someone the encouragement to finish their story. Share with the world!
Let it exists then prefect it later
That ending was weak, but I like the art style nevertheless it was interesting to follow along.
Even though they got back together, there's still a gap and this sex scene feels a bit sallow even though feelings are being shared
ya i feel like their 'argument' got quickly skimmed over. like there isn't much of a resolve and they don't seem to change their attitudes to the sex
I don't think the author handled the intimacy well in this chapter. It felt rushed and I think it's because they have been building up intention this far (or avoiding it) and now confronting it is a challenge. I did feel uncomfortable with both of them thou.
The cabbage patch ears
It's called califlower ear, and a lot of boxers get it as a result of the repeated heavy blows made to their ears. I wanted to start boxing, but I definetly won't be sparring... ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Thanks for the info man
I realized it is so common among authors to add SA and disguise it as love or feelings. This story started off perfectly the exploration of the love hotel was fun and new. Then it turn into shit after that scene. I really have to wonder if these authors even had sex before; consensual sex at least. I get it i get it it's just a story but Damn! Yall will eat up anything that is sprinkled with a little bit of B.S, bad writing and SA!!!!
Yup, but at this point it's not even bad writing it's simply a trope. Yaoi isn't for the gays, is for the girls who like straight man SA each other. People like that... Probably it's something that is vary consumed so there is a demand for stories like that. #－.－)
i agree, whenever i try to find a good BL ill always see SA at least once or twice. its really weird how autors continue to normalize it in their books ┗( T﹏T )┛
i just want to read more fluffy ones without the SA and just a normal actual relationship building up....i love smut, but jeez the SA can be left out fr
Ikr!!!! And it's amazing (and tiring at the same time) how most of the stories are the same...to me is a shame cause sometimes this stories are like really sweet or good (or at least have the potential!!) but they just ruined them with UNNECESSARY SA
But don't loose hope people! There is always a BL or yaoi with delicious consent.
Yes but I wish the tags were (more) clear about that