The characters are so flat, I couldn't even finish it. I wish more authors would be more flexible with personalities. Like we didn't even get how to see how the Top developed feelings for the bottom. We have too much bad stories with good art.
Can someone explain to me why Jake and shin was looking at the next car?
if i remember correctly jake put a camera in the car to watch shin
Oh so they just freaky then lol
I was going to complain how this kind of felt off for me, but then I felt the urge that I have to give someone the encouragement to finish their story. Share with the world!
Let it exists then prefect it later
That ending was weak, but I like the art style nevertheless it was interesting to follow along.
Even though they got back together, there's still a gap and this sex scene feels a bit sallow even though feelings are being shared
ya i feel like their 'argument' got quickly skimmed over. like there isn't much of a resolve and they don't seem to change their attitudes to the sex
I don't think the author handled the intimacy well in this chapter. It felt rushed and I think it's because they have been building up intention this far (or avoiding it) and now confronting it is a challenge. I did feel uncomfortable with both of them thou.
The cabbage patch ears
It's called califlower ear, and a lot of boxers get it as a result of the repeated heavy blows made to their ears. I wanted to start boxing, but I definetly won't be sparring... ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
Thanks for the info man
I realized it is so common among authors to add SA and disguise it as love or feelings. This story started off perfectly the exploration of the love hotel was fun and new. Then it turn into shit after that scene. I really have to wonder if these authors even had sex before; consensual sex at least. I get it i get it it's just a story but Damn! Yall will eat up anything that is sprinkled with a little bit of B.S, bad writing and SA!!!!