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Didn’t really like it. First of all, her name is Blondina (I can’t) and she isn’t really doing anything? When she was a child she was more assertive and smart, but then when she grows up she’s the damsel in distress and whenever something happens, she SAYS that she has to do something but then doesn’t do much. Amon is the one to always save her in the end.
Secondly, I don’t really like their relationship, it’s not very healthy. It’s cute if you read it but then you realise he is very possessive (and even when they weren’t even dating) and it always feels like he is another baby, not her husband. They don’t have good communication and again, the whole jealousy thing is very bad.
Also, the whole thing where he lost his memory was so weird, it didn’t have to be part of the story. I don’t even know why they included that.
I guess the prince had a nice development, but they didn’t really show it that much. Father didn’t really do a good job in the past and now he has MUCH to do to repent for that. This also may be why I’m not that mad at the princess (the villain). She wanted affection, there wasn’t someone to teach her right from wrong and she ended up desperate and afraid she’s too far gone to change her plans. Also there was a mother somewhere, right? I’m not remembering wrong? We have no idea where she is now, she hasn’t been mentioned at all. Maybe I missed something.
All in all, would not read again.