Kei acts the way I did when I was too vain to wear glasses on certain occasions and didn't have contacts yet. FYI I'm super blind without glasses.
Well, the author does exaggerate if that's what they are going for, but as I see it, it would make sense.
I mean, I could foresee every plot twist by chapter 5 or so, it's just too cliché and constantly wants to have its cake and eat it too. It's anything but smartly written, but at least it could entertain a bit, minus a few setbacks that counteracted some of the few things I originally felt were done well compared to others.
But now we are here. They now got divorced, but the emperor literally telling the dude to get a divorce and beat her to the punch just tool even that last bit apart completely. There's situations in which feelings simply don't matter, they are irrelevant, and big political coups are usually one of those. By roping their divorce into a plot planned by the emperor, all the things that came before and the act of the divorce itself feels meaningless now, like some unimportant thing that happened before. I wished authors would stop roping the original bad relationship into some other shit. I never liked it in other stories either. Because handing someone their own ass properly just fails to have meaning when their misbehaviour wasn't actually because of their stupidity or ignorance, but because it just didn't matter, since there was some big plan behind it that was bigger than just a partner being unfaithful.
Judging him for being unfaithful feels like persecuting a serial killer and judging him for the things he steals from his victims as mementos.
Seriously, you can't try to tell me they naturally changed. It's way too obvious that they have fallen for some magic or shit like that. A charm maybe.
Depending on how it is explained, that will lead to certain problems, which is why this trope is where intrigue usually goes to die. Because, aside from those who just want to hate on a character, you can't really fault a character for falling for something like that. Magic would stand above natural feelings and I hate how people always pretend that just because it might be a generally strong character, that they have no right to let themselves be manipulated and are thus to be held accountable for doing things beyond their will.
I have seen this so many times, but only one (really great!) story did this in a good way. You can still hate the backstabbing bitches, because the story stated firmly that the potion used on them could not meddle with their common sense, but only unveiled their hidden emotions of envy, inferiority and whatnot, which had already been there. (Manga: "The One Within the Villainess")
Here, maybe it's like this as well, but my hopes aren't very high for that. Maybe they aren't actually manipulated, but my hopes are even less for that one.
It's super anticlimactic to end on a note of guys despairing (which we still hope for, since that's what revenge stories are built upon) after you find out they were victims themselves.
Now, in case it wasn't obvious, I literally only read the first chapter, so this is to be taken with a grain of salt. But I instantly felt annoyed at the start of the story, which is never a good sign. We'll see.
i love people like you lol. i very much am enjoying a story like this where it’s kinda rough on both ends cause they’re obviously being manipulated with magic but come off as terrible people although they are victims themselves. i don’t care how many times i have to read the same plots, it’s always intriguing.
I think it just feels empty. It's useless to be angry at someone and wish them whatever, like some comments I've seen on the first page, when you know it's not actually their fault. It's not even "hardship on both ends", because that would be if they were of sound mind and had done what they hwd to because they couldn't change it. In that case, they still chose to do it and not even secretly let her in on it, thus they made their bed and now they have to die in it.
But in this version, someone else makes them do things, they can't even choose, thus the protagonist suffers from their actions in one instance, while they already suffer because they have their free will taken from them. Afterwards, when they are being released, not even mentioning whatever repercussions they might face on other occasions, they will all be in pain over the loss of protagonist, who was important to them, so they suffer again, because they never slighted her out of their own will, while MC will be over it at that point and likely remain the victim that everybody has to apologize to - while conveniently forgetting they were victims before she even became the collateral.
While details depend on the story, it always goes the same. A story like that is readable, sure, but there's just a fart left were there was once suspension as to how we will kick their asses later.
But in the end, that's my opinion; I'm no fan of this. If you like it, go for it, lol.
I was literally thinking of The One Within the Villainess while reading this
While reading the story or the comment? xD
Well, anyway, now that I've read a few chapters, it's clear that I was right. You can even see scenes in which they realize their true feelings and feel confused and restless, then the blonde bitch is all over them and we are back to square one. They just aren't actually bad guys.
I read your recommendation and it was amazing, literally couldn't put my phone down u till I finished, please recommend me more!!!
I thought of it while reading the story so it was nice to see another fan of the story . I feel bad for the guys but like
Nah I totally agree with this EXCEPT FOR in the case of Ian. The other too guys tho they were blunt and cold they weren’t mean or vindictive. They never said anything straight up mean about her or too her fr. Ian has been hostile since the moment she woke up
Especially Ian, I think, is likely the most affected. He's around her a lot and he seemed to have had a more hot headed nature to begin with, as he yells even at grace that one time.
But he's the guy she would have had to manipulate the most and she's the most around him. When she wasn't around, the other two woke up a bit, before they went back to how they were in a second when the bitch showed up. As the story stands, it's likely not to be his fault. Unlike the rule in "The One Within...", they are obviously brainwashed here, because they show all the signs of it.
But anyway, this story is a lost cause. Basically every character shown has the intelligence of a dried walnut.
Now, you see, this is an interesting case. I came across this story a little while ago, while I was looking for another piece of work that would become part of a mass of inoffensive sludge, that will soon vanish under my radar and entertain me only for a moment. I thought this one wouldn't do the trick, so I kept ignoring it, until yesterday evening, when I finally thought to myself: Doesn't that title actually sound a lot like the trope I dig lately? So I clicked on it and I was surprised about how I missed such a gem for so long. I even went onto another side and created an account, just so I could comment on it and read up to the latest chapter, chapter 127, which wasn't available on Mangago. And since I can't make a normal Topic-Comment here anymore, I will just dump all of my latest thoughts into my official review. So let's not waste any more time and dive right into it.
The story kicks off with a prologue, where we are already told the basic premise of the story. The FL, who seems to have more names than Kiefer Sutherland throughout translations (let's just call her Ass, because she was raised as the butt of every joke), is born into a highly ranked noble family, Cloix (or maybe Croix? Cross?), settled in the Robinia Empire. Or maybe Roberyll. Or Roberia. Whatever. She was raised strictly, working her ass off, staying useful, while her younger sibling was treated like an angel before the lord. As if she was the fucking second coming of christ or something, really. So one day something happened, during their happy schooldays, Ass slapped her sister, Lilier... or Lillian, or Lilliel - let's call her Turd for this assessment - in front of a lot of others, since then she was known as the titular »Evil Lady« (roll credits). So now Ass is coming of age, she's engaged to some randy, basically incapable of smiling earnestly and just doing everything she's supposedly obligated to do, while Turd is constantly nagging her ass, trying to flaunt her alleged moral highground in front of her, while doing nothing specific to earn her current status:
Her ideas seem idiotic, her conviction is flawed, her childishness makes one sick and despite all this, she is still loved. Isn't she simply a character you would love to hate?
But the more you get to know them both and the people around them, something starts smelling fishy. Still, one never knows, so you just have to take it for granted - maybe she ain't actually that bad? Maybe Turd's simply too young to realize that some things don't simply go the way you want, just because you say so? Like hosting a charity event, but hosting an art exhibition first, because the one who's actually hosting the exhibition is one of the biggest sponsors of the charity event. So Ass gives it her all to help with the exhibition, postponing the charity, so the old Lady, thankful and kind, would donate a shit ton of money, so they would be able to provide more provisions than ever before. Ass also helped her family's business while doing so and did all the work related to their private finances and house management.
Turd, on other side of the toilet seat, wouldn't understand any of this shit, she simply thinks (if she thinks at all): »Whaaaaaaaaaaaat?! Art Exhibitions aren't as important as charity events!!! You greedy, evil monster!11!!1« - and of course, everybody else follows Turd in her opinion.
At last, a marriage proposal arrives at their home, send from another Kingdom, the Amaryllis Kingdom. Or Amaris. Or whatever (I have literally never seen a Webtoon OR Manga, where different Translators where THIS incapable of coming to the same conclusion for names of characters and places). It's a guy known as »The Monster of the North«. Of course, the very simple, down to earth Turd, who would never indulge in any kind of luxury, while wearing a tailored, beautiful knight attire with a giant gemstone attached to her collar, would never marry out of obligation for family and kingdom, whom she claims to do everything for, but only out of love. Additionally, the grand duke is known as a Monster, for whatever reason, and the palace there is also bleak and ugly, so she would never want to live there - but of course, it's all about the virtues!
They do try to make Turd go, but she threatens to kill herself if they force her, so no can do, I guess. They gave in to her temper tantrum, but luckily, right that moment, the fiancé of Ass decided to annull their engagement, so they were able to send her instead. Congratulations!
When she arrives in the north, though, everyone seems to be very nice, the palace is beautiful and the duke is a cute ass chucklefuck, who gets along with Ass right off the bat. So, all's well that end's well, huh? Well, not directly.
You see, the grand duke of Ama-whatever is actually important to the King, because his family has been taking care of an old magic problem that only his bloodline can solve. They need to use their Winterbreak Magic to go into the woods every winter and fight »Winter«, in order to save the world from being covered in ice and snow. But there's bad people who wish for just that to happen - an old family called "Aarundy", as opposed to the ML's Ducal family, the Winternet's. Or Winternights. Winterne? Well, anyway. They were supposedly beaten, but it seems they have returned and now they are up to no good.
Ass and her new hubby, Ryan, live the life of newlyweds, fighting to the death with their enemies here and there, making new friends and having fun, while now and then, we get to see what's happening in her old home. After she went to the north, people suddenly started to see Turd for what she is - not all at once, but gradually, steadily and pretty fast at that. Now, in current chapters, it is finally revealed how this whole shit even came to happen - we also get to know Ass' treatment in her childhood, a lot more than before. She was only used, only seen when she did her sister's bidding, was never acknowledged and they did things to her mental state, that could never be amended, even if they really tried - and even if they aren't actually at fault, since they were all manipulated by magic, without anyone knowing, including the perpetrator.
That's the perfect cue to get to the main point of this review. As the plot in and on itself is sitting pretty between stories like »The Duchess' 50 Tea Recipes«, »Lady Chef Royale« or »I Became the Ugly Lady« and a lot of others, there's still one thing that makes me especially interested in the upcoming chapters of this particular example of a well-known and well-used trope. It is the psychological aspect of Turd's character and thus, the emotional pay off this seems to be working towards.
Of course, I can't tell what's going to happen and what the author is going to do with the setup they created, but I can only hope for the best. This is such a good story that way.
Let me explain my thoughts a little: On one hand, Turd is the only one in her bubble that isn't manipulated by anything, aside from the fact that she was raised the way she was. That means, whatever bullshit she's spouting, she actually fucking means every single word. She never saw what she did to her sister, when she, for example, gave away all of the jewelry her grandma left to her, except for one necklace, which she didn't know existed when she took the jewelry box from Ass' room without her consent. She really thought, in her warped mined, that what she did was in Ass' favour. That makes her the Turd she cleary is, since she's so incapable of self reflecting, it's like she's a fucking black hole, from which no coherent thought can escape.
Yet, on the other hand, she was unable to learn how the world functions and why it works the way it does, which is why she never understood her sister's motivations and thoughts. Since our main was the only one who wasn't manipulated by her, she was also the only person close to Turd that didn't do her bidding or tended to her every whim. Turd never got the chance to see her own faults, because everyone around her made it seem as if whatever she did was the epitome of perfection - without her knowing that it wasn't because they genuinely believed she was great, but just because they couldn't defy her. If the people around her will ever be fully healed of all of this, she will not only be shocked by mere followers leaving her, as Ass anticipated - no, she will have to re-assess her whole fucking existence.
Like, when I went into this, I thought: »What the fuck-a-duck is this?! Are you differently abled, you blonde womble? And why are all the other people simply standing there and cheer her one, like a bunch of bobbleheads?!« Seriously, none of her words and actions made sense in the long run and she was only led to believe it made sense, because so many people reassured her trough their actions. She's also part of a family with a lot of influence, so their social circle is quite high up there, which means she manipulated people from the cream of the crop in person, who in turn manipulated others through their standing in society. So, in that way, she could easily maintain a tight grasp on the flow of society within her empire for years.
But that doesn't work out for a lot of people in reality and as soon as the manipulation even lessens just a tiny bit, people will realize how stupid their decisions were and revert back right away, maybe even feeling stressed out about themselves and Turd in the process, for acting like this in the first place. If Turd then doesn't have the power of Aarundy anymore, she will have to wake up to reality, actually work and put in some effort to be of any worth to the people she supposedly worked for. The character we have seen until now will not be able to cope with that kind of life.
They unintentionally raised a monster, and the moment everyone realizes that, her whole life will come down like a house of cards. And, since that's how people usually are, especially nobles with a high pride, that don't really care about others when they have no real connection to them, they will probably see Turd as the one at fault. Even without knowing about the manipulation. I mean, it already started. They start talking ugly behind her back, as more time passes and only those who were close to her and for a long time at that, would still be influenced enough to not see all the mistakes she makes as she tries to step in for the work her sister formerly did (and she only does work that's seen by others, like charity events hosted by her family and shit). I don't know if I anticipate this moment because I'm interested in what the author does with the setup they created or because I want to have a good laugh once in a while.
Well, the long in short: It's a great story, with a great psychological undertone for at least one character. I hope it won't let me down when it comes down to that part. We'll see.
This is exactly what I thought when I realized "Turd" was mind fuckng people all around. She was living in a delusion of her own making, one that she can't possibly change because the forceful logic she applied to everyone who opposed her wasn't even her goal or even her main purpose. She arrived to a conclusion, a flawed one, but no one could correct her nor refute her only sway her and because of this she grow up to be a child, a spoiled brat, that couldn't get away of her own fallacies. The only saving grace is that books and read materials, although not infallible, gave her enough knowledge to go by even if it left her unprepared to mundane social interactions. She was left with no social filter nor acceptance of a different opinions, it was obvious that her mental breakdown was correlated to this. Even so I glad the author didn't unnecessarily delay the ending, although I would have appreciated a side story.
Gaining distance is truly the only reasonable reaction to that amount of misplaced self esteem. Oh boi.
No, dear, he's not. Also, he doesn't look like a psychopath "right now", he IS a psychopath, so he always looks like one, because his face is that of a psychopath, no matter what he looks like in the moment.
I love Ilay, but we gotta keep it real.