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Spoiler tagged to protect new readers since I mention the ending.
Hey I need a novel reader to confirm something. Was it just me, or was the ending rushed?
It felt like a lot of things were left unresolved.
It feels like Luvi was slowly cut out and became irrelevant around the end,
Melphis' end felt a little too open-ended, with us never even seeing him respond to the messages Vivi left on the mirror,
Dietrich I feel like we could've seen a bit more there, like maybe a reluctant Luvi awkwardly comforting her brother's first failed romance.
But we got none of that.
Like don't get me wrong, I'm fine the other 3 didn't end up with Vivi, I don't really care, and I'm actually happy Melphis and Dietrich were shown as being so mature, realizing Vivi wouldn't reciprocate their feelings and accepting that she would be happy with Ren. It's a fresh take on the usual men fighting over MC without considering her wishes trope.
But idk, it just felt kinda. Rushed? Lackluster? At the end. I want a novel reader to confirm if it really was rushed, and if the novel actually went more into Melphis, Dietrich, and Luvi's fates at the end. (If Luvi gets more content, I'm Going to be reading the novel, is why I'm asking.)
Ty novel readers in advance.
Writing after chapter 91:
Can't decide which is worse between these two possibilities:
1. After the Pope took in Isaac (Casablanca), he Gave him the name Isaac as a way of replacing his missing son Isaac out of grief of having lost him
2. He's just pretending his name was Isaac just to rename Sol Isaac JUST to fuck with Iana, or to replace Isaac C. because he's grieving his loss
Because I think grief is definitely a major motivation for the Pope, wanting to turn everyone into soul gems or whatever to avoid human mortality, and Isaac's death was the trigger for this new plot. But between the two above possibilities I can't decide which one would be more fucked up.