This story is so incredibly bad I can't even express how I feel about it. The author really has a talent for making me dislike every character (except the two old guys). The ml is just trash and his excuses are one of the worst to exist (gives the vibe of "oh wait I still need to excuse ml's shitty behaviour) and what the flip happend to MC's plan from the beginning? Like bro did not do shit and his whole character is being a victim and not leaning to stand up for himself... Great ... What an amazing story... We began with a shitty ml and a weak MC and ended with a ml that "learned" from his behaviour and definitely "reflected" what he has done and a MC that had an amazing character development *cough *cough (technically he had more backbone at the beginning?really don't know how he can lose self respect over the timespan?)
(i have to get this of my chest so I'm adding this)
Like you have characters that fall victim to manipulation and can't escape these toxic situations/can't handle them properly because of trauma or insecurities. These characters are when written well or even just okay most of the time more relatable and likeable and you root for their development and for a happy future. But this guy... He's the kind of character thats only trait is being a victim. No change nothing. He is just pathetic. And for the love of god i cannot care about him being stabbed or ml being sad about it because both did not change or had any impact on me where I can say "wow I really want them to be happy". Nothing. Mc is only suffering the WHOLE time and when ml is suffering then MC is suffering even more during this time. The fuck? How can I start liking any of them in that way? I liked MC at the beginning but now he is just pathetic and ml's "development" is just a bad excuse like what was that?? Two seconds "oh man I hope he isn't suffering like I am rn" like bro suffered the whole time u just didn't gave a fuck... Don't even remember if he realised it know cuz these scenes had no impact and little to no Time to develop and impact the reading.
(i have to get this of my chest so I'm adding this)
Like you have characters that fall victim to manipulation and can't escape these toxic situations/can't handle them properly because of trauma or insecurities. These characters are when written well or even just okay most of the time more relatable and likeable and you root for their development and for a happy future. But this guy... He's the kind of character thats only trait is being a victim. No change nothing. He is just pathetic. And for the love of god i cannot care about him being stabbed or ml being sad about it because both did not change or had any impact on me where I can say "wow I really want them to be happy". Nothing.
Also Mc is only suffering the WHOLE time and when ml is suffering then MC is suffering even more during this time. The fuck? How can I start liking any of them in that way? I liked MC at the beginning but now he is just pathetic and ml's "development" is just a bad excuse like what was that?? Two seconds "oh man I hope he isn't suffering like I am rn" like bro suffered the whole time u just didn't gave a fuck... Don't even remember if he realised it know cuz these scenes had no impact and little to no Time to develop and impact the reading
Sry but I don't get ML's shitty behaviour when they reunited when he knew a lot about MC's situation back then???? Like for me he was still a bitch for no reason and gets mad at MC when he doesn't like it ? The backstory doesn't justify shit for him I still don't like him
Hmmm actually no lol. That does not matter, it doesn’t warranty him treating mc like shit and trying to mind fuck him.
He’s sad and upset because his best friend, person of comfort, and first love, left without a word, correct? At the end of the day mc already cut him off that day with the last conversation, although it sucks, he’s not obligated to stay and continue their relationship. Mc also found out that ml was “using” him bc of his brother remember? A misunderstanding ofc and to add on mc thought sẹo is in love with his brother too.
Youre acting like it’s okay for him to act like that bc it’s his reason. No it doesn’t excuse his actions, while mc was also hurt at ml. He never lashes out at him and was polite when they reunited
I don't know how that is a good excuse or explanation? The only way I could say "yeah ml's behaviour is shitty but I understand why" is If he had no idea about MC situation at all. But he knows a lot about him. He knows the stuff going on with his father and he knows that his life is pretty shitty cuz of people around him and the responsibilities he has. But even then the feeling alone isn't a good excuse !??








This is so drippy