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This has some cute moments but man was the redemption lacking. The FL folded way too quickly. Sure, I understand she still has feelings for him no matter what she says but they should've had the ML make it up to her anyway.
Just leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
Like dude, there was no way you could've pulled her into a secret passage and like given her a letter to read so no one could overhear or something?! Why leave her in the dark for 8 years?!! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Barely on chapter 17 and this MC thinking he knows what will make the Fml happy after he /just/ mentioned asking for her opinion makes me want to smack him upside the head. I'm with Papah, who is he to decide what will make someone else happy?
He could just straight out tell the chick(a grown woman) and, you know, let her make the decision. But nooo instead he goes with "let me treat her like she's an empty headed child" even though she's a strong martial artist in her own right and even saved his ass a few times.
Seriously?
Did he learn absolutely nothing about this woman in the time he spent with her?!