For a short story, this was beyond ridiculous and underwhelming. But hey! Atleast the art is gorgeous. 1/10
God, I hope this never updates.. such a fucking crappy story
It was going so well too, up till he turned batshit
I don't think I'm even feeling this story. Why does Dane even hate Grayson so much
Dane is a dominant omega, and he wants to hide it, since it can be dangerous for him if it is known. And Grayson already found out.
In addition Dane is a tsundere and he is "allergic" to love/relationships, because of a family related trauma.
I think reading kiss me liar and kiss me if you can will give you more of a perspective on why Grayson is so hated by all the good characters. He gave his (alpha) brother lifelong trauma by making him think that he spent his rut with a dog. And was always discriminatory against betas. Dane seems to have a strong sense of justice seeing how much he cares about protecting the weak and how even the thought of Grayson having been abused is enough to soften his heart.
Who wouldn't hate that mf