this was barely a chapter wth
That was a whole novel chapter tho. Artist was the stingy one. There was more angst and Angie being scared of Winston, because he was letting his alpha stink around the whole place like a douche
Do u know what chapter in the novel?
Chapters 48-50
the overexplanation on the notes sometimes is too much, makes me feel like im talked down to
maybe you should reflect on why it made you feel that way :) it’s important to acknowledge and appreciate things that don’t benefit you (in this case, explaining idioms which are a massive help to non-english native readers) while also realizing that it doesn’t mean to offend you just because you aren’t the target audience. this might stem from a sense of insecurity or ego. no hate tho!
my comment was triggered by the panel of the esper being depicted with wings and being referred to as a "predator" and there was a note explaining what the word predator means. the handholding is too much and the overexplanation takes away from the art.
also, people can look up things themselves. it's a part of learning.
orrr maybe the translator js undeestands what it’s like to not know what stuff means and tried to make it easier for readers so they don’t have to search it up
i feel like the top didnt truly develop. like everything was handed to him, both in the story and writing-wise. it also lowkey toxic of him to just kiss and fuck his way out when gunjoon tries to communicate and the story didnt exactly address that.
it feels a little lacking to me,, we've seen them jndividually come to terms w their feelings but now it ended without showing us how they fall in love as pair.. idk if i explained that right anyways i hope we get sides i want to see them being domestic