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poyo created a topic of Salt Heart

The only thing I feel when I read this is pure fucking hatred. The ML doesn’t even have to be in the chapter for me to feel this boiling disgust in my stomach. And if ur reading this cuz u like it no shame but fuck the rage inside my soul just can’t stan him.

poyo created a topic of Duke's Private Tutor

That’s honestly how I would describe it, mid. It’s not bad and definitely not good it’s kinda nice if you turn your brain off and just scroll but otherwise it’s really frustrating. The MC really pmo he was so strange, weird, and honestly so sad to see such wasted potential, the same goes for the ML. Noah was really cute and honestly I just continued reading because of him otherwise if ur on the fence about this one here’s a tip, don’t.

poyo created a topic of Circuit Breaker

This story is so confusing it’s bending the rules of physics. Like genuinely I’m so fucking confused if you asked me to summarize it I wouldn’t even know where to start cuz I genuinely have not a single clue as to where this story started nor where it’s going. Honestly maybe we’re just all on speed..

poyo created a topic of Once Upon a Deal

That man is a god damn psycho and deserves to loose his balls and dick wtf that’s so horrible. On that note wtf is wrong with the brother??? I refuse to understand nor accept his delusions of love, that man is psycho and you good sir are pathetic for being in love with him. ON THAT NOTE why did Medusa over here think that he would ascend?? Makes no sense there must be something more to this story that ML isn’t aware of because I refuse to believe that man just started tweaking after not being allowed in to the party…

poyo created a topic of Arelyn Is Sick and Tired

This is even more gay than gay sex. Like wayyyy more gay would be great if we got some tho, would not complain.

Idk maybe it’s just me but it feels like every single one looks like a teenager like maybe 15 max (except the dad obvi) like is that the intention? Is everyone actually like 13? And like they get more grown in the later chapters?

poyo created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

How on earth is everyone fumbling so bad?? Yall talking about killing the leader like we’re discussing the fucking weather!!!??? Yall wanna die so bad it makes u look stupid. Also teach is probably the worst liar ever known on earth this man can not lie for the LITERAL life of him!!! Is he being so fr rn? (⊙…⊙ ) like it could, no should have been SO EASY to just “wtf are you talking about?? I would never do such a thing you know my stance on killing, ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶”… either way they’re all so fucking cooked guwon and the hounds are gonna have a fucking cook out grilling their asses.

I need that man’s potent zaddy nut. I need his dick so far up my coochie I’ll become a god damn sock puppet. Amen

poyo created a topic of When The Weekend Comes

It’s pretty good a solid 7.5/10 definitely not something to write home about but it’s nice. Neither character is very complicated, woojoo is really cute and no unnecessary angst or misunderstandings that last longer than like a second.

poyo created a topic of Alpha Trauma

“Awe you gowna be owkay

poyo created a topic of The Hounds of Sisyphus

This man holds no regard for his life or health because why did he almost immediately start trusting some shady ass cuck who he’s been explicitly warned about??? HELLO 911 THIS GUY IS FLINGING HIMSELF INTO ONCOMING TRAFFIC!!!! Like okay I get it he’s kinda crazy and desperate but bro was so obviously shady it’s not even funny

poyo created a topic of The Hashtag is First Love

I NEED that woman to peg me to D E A T H PLEASE. Amen

poyo created a topic of Jinx

Idk why but I have such a soft spot for old little ladies and nana was so cute . When she smiled at the end it had me bawling

poyo created a topic of The Road to You

This bitch acting like she’s so done with that garbage man and yet she’s flirting with him because now “she wants to ruin his life” okay bitch you suck

poyo created a topic of Boredom Alert

I can’t stand these weak, meek, gullible ukes. Stand up and dust off that crown king this is pathetic.

poyo created a topic of No More Regrets

Is the FL stupid?? She knew that the other girl was shady af and still trusts her?? Or as she claims she knew it was a trap but still went? Completely unprepared and without a backup plan??? Is she stupid?? The only things she’s got going for her is her giant knockers cuz her head is apparently just for decoration. And the butler has to pay the price??? AGAIN??!!!

poyo created a topic of Eighteen's Bed
Nah

They’re all going to hell

poyo created a topic of Tears on a Withered Flower

Okay hear me out, I dislike ginger over here as much as the next guy and I could potentially appreciate the authors effort in establishing his lore and reasoning HOWEVER I really don’t think it works. I could potentially, theoretically, hypothetically see how and why this would be oh so sad. But his horrible previous performance as boyfriend nr 1 was so horrendous and catastrophic that I really don’t think or could even fathom how anyone could justify or maybe even sympathize with his character.
I think that to make a character actually realistic and multidimensional you have to establish actually realistic characteristics. And I also don’t necessarily believe that every single character that’s evil or morally grey deserves or NEEDS a sad backstory.

poyo created a topic of Salt Heart

This man would be the sole representative in my suicide note. Every single chapter makes him seem more like a fucking dick. May his penis fall off and may his genes die out. That man is a rutting hound and should be shot like a fucking dog.

poyo created a topic of Garment

That ending was absolute dogshit. It hated the ML throughout the whole story but Ive read some of the authors previous work and liked it…this however was not it. Was genuinely rooting for the other guy and to justify the MC and ML ending up together he becomes some shady asshole??? Cmon that’s so fucking lazy it’s neither entertaining nor interesting. The arts great but like the BS story of the MC left a sour taste in my mouth and the apology was lowkey ass. Like pick yourself up king that man is a walking talking dog and NOT worth your time, live or effort.