jaeyi been getting on my nerves. This plot device came at a perfect time(▰˘◡˘▰)
My gripe isn’t with what happened per se. It’s the disparity of what this chapter was communicating to the reader (the fact that Ideum is losing his autonomy and respect as a human from the person who he first felt seen from) and the way it was depicted (which was typical bl smut, when the writing in this bl gave me hope for something much more considered, rather than a sell out for smut enjoyers).
My other gripe is this comment sections refusal to critique Jaeyi’s actions for what they were and instead justify them because “well Ideum is a exhibitionist”. The two are separate matters and can be talked about separately. Neither give right for the other.
I understand why this chapter exists, and it’s not just some sex that some of y’all are insisting that it is. It’s so clearly demonstrating Ideums loss of autonomy in the relationship and how he’s basically seen/treated like a sex object. It’s setting up Jaeyi’s character growth. However personally, I’m a bit shocked and appalled at the degree of SA the author chose for Jaeyi to commit. I also think the (porny) way in which it’s depicted really detracts from what Ideum loses and what he realises in the moment.
so a man and a woman (both tops) where helping each other out to manipulate their respective male coworkers so they could butt fuck them?? Am I reading this right????
I am SICK of seeing “twinkification” thrown at Garam. It is so clearly a progressive art style change considering EVERY CHARACTER CHANGED WITH GARAM. The artist so obviously found their style through drawing this bl, they had moved from more realistic proportions for EVERYONE, to a more stylised look FOR EVERYONE.
wow! its the “miraculously virgin uke who had no reason to be a virgin” and the “forever pining seme who had a slut era” who couldve seen that coming !
Author redeeming themselves after “even if you don’t love me”
they keep looking more and more gaunt… not the celebrity anorexia epidemic getting to my babies too
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The amount of care and thought the author has put into their characters is SERIOUSLY UNMATCHED.
It truly just makes sense why they depend on eachother and love each other. One of, if not the best writing I have witnessed in bl.
I wanted jaeyi to fall first and fall HARD and get initially rejected… But now they’re just easing into a healthy relationship and I… like it ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
the constant LACK of the ability to understand time and place when reacting (overreacting) exhibited by the uke, IS SERIOUSLY GETTING ON MY NERVES.
sigh… before i continue reading this, can someone confirm if its the typical virgin uke and experienced seme even tho he’s been pining since childhood. would rather drop and not waste my time if thats the case. （￣へ￣）