the artist is a lil bit clueless when comes to the anatomy of a penis…
words cannot describe how needed this was for them. INCLUDING the journey they took to get there. I’m very glad nothing felt rushed (▰˘◡˘▰)
EW who the fuck is that forward with someone in a professional setting. the red head twink honestly a fucking creep, PMO.
lowkey I’m a little confused about the unreliable narrator/crazy allegations for the MC… someone explain please cause i feel like i’m just missing a lot :3
Lowkey what the point of opening the bl with flash back sex when we get to the same sex scene by the end of the chapter… ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I think the uke being branded as “naive” is plain wrong. I think he’s extremely strong, refusing to let shitty circumstances steal his kindness and light. He’s honestly handled everything the best he could.
bro… the seme’s character is literally written like a dildo… like i wasn’t expecting much relationship building, learning of the semes intentions and backstory due to the length of the bl, BUT I wasn’t expecting it to be THIS much of a slop read.
also the dick beads just magically appearing after having not been there.
ALSO ALSO, what else was the uke going to assume other than fuckbuddies when the seme hadn’t uttered a WORD of affection or a HINT that he might like him back. EVEN the semes internal monologue was dreading “taking responsibility” and dating the uke after the first time they had sex.
AGAIN I GET this is meant to be a slop read… but not this poorly written.
is Suah a male manipulator, evil, toxic and obsessive? YES. But does he love Juhyeok for who he is? ALSO YES. While old fart isnt as toxic and manipulative per se, HE IS shallow, pushy, a sexual harasser and disgusting for all of it + his main motive literally being that he wants something because he can’t have it.
Idk i think I’m experiencing cognitive dissonance between weighing up old fart and Suah because Suah is written like a fictional character and old fart is wirtten like a REAL LIFE MAN (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
anyways INDEPENDENCE, LOVE AND PEACE FOR JUHYEOK
CAN HE FUCKING STOP UNREALISTICALLY STABBING HIM WITH A BARE FUCKING HAND. PISSING ME OFF. it’s such a stupid fucking thing to add
lowkey wtf did this even turn into??? kinda irritated with the genre switch from light hearted comedy to whatever the fuck this is now. This + the length of the most recent chapters just feels like authors are just trying to squeeze out as much money as humanly possible from a story
I would LOVE for men to understand what respect, boundaries OR KEEPING YOUR HANDS TO YOUR FUCKING SELF meant
thanking the comments for saving me from irritation and anguish (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
the fist half is utter SEX COECER RAPIST APOLOGIST BULLSHIT. IT SO FUCKING PISSES ME OFF HOW THE UKE IS LABELED AS AN ASSHOLE FOR ASSUMING FUCK BUDDIES WHEN THE SEME LITERALLY FORCED HIM INTO CONTINUOUS SEX IN THE FIRST PLACE. oh and lets not FUCKING FORGET THE LITERAL SOMNOPHILIA. The uke is literally a fucking victim but anyways, and the bs thing is the author is aware of everything i previously stated. kink bullshit SLOP read for the first half.
anyways rereading it and it got me riled up, tho i do remember the second half being cutesy but across my years of bl reading ive become to woke-joshi to look past a beginning like this one, ESPECIALLY when its not even marketed as toxic. literally wolf in sheeps clothing type fucking story
yall… its the ukes prerogative if he doesnt wanna date someone. He can’t just force himself to have feelings
IM WAITING FOR THE TWO OTHER SIDE COUPLE STORIES PLEASE. please gorgeous elegant omega put that old fart in his place :3















