The way the creator choses to change scenes Is a bit weird. We'd be in one scene it'll switch to a moment after whatever was happening in scene 1 and while in the current scene(scene2) we'll have a flashback to show us how the first scene ended which is a common thing when wanting to leave a mini cliff hanger so we'd be left wondering how did the first scene play out and it's done quite often in other stories as well but this story does it like twice or three times a chapter which just becomes repetitive and confusing like why do I need to see a flashback of the scene from two panels ago? if it just played out fully then continued on instead of cutting, going forward, then back, then forward again we have a better flow
I can't feel sorry for MC because I genuinely believe he did the same fuckass evil shit , ive always believed rapist should get ten times what they did done to them so I don't really care what he goes through, but if it turns out he didn't even play a big part in what the "evil" pretty boy went though I'd feel bad for him
The way kasuya and kazuya haven't even kissed yet and as soon as raper guy tried to kiss him he ran out of there, harada is really such a good author because when kasuya and kazuya do actually kiss it will be so much more impactful.
They rarely have these serious moments so for a bit I actually started doubting whether they'd really be together but twice now they've sat next to each other, looked into eachothers eyes and almost kissed so obviously they're developing feelings they're just too stupid to process it








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