Jungsoupieee

This chapter was funny and all, but I feel so bad for the other girl (I forgot her name guys TT forgive me). Kind of hits deep when you've gone through it personally with the whole "How can my parents accept me if my grades define who I am." （/TДT)/
I just feel sad over her :(
Maybe its just the late night procrastination getting to me tho </3

I think the story seemed interesting at the start but then FL became essentially a character with no flaws. Makes her feel like she just came out of a Wattpad story because everyone immediately likes her so much yk? Like at the start some of the relationships made sense (with the general liking her cause she saved his life), but when she started having a relationship with the ML, they dumbed her down and just made her a pretty princess who needs saving. I feel like that's okay sure, but even when she saw the people she promised she'd kill at the beginning with no mercy, she completely lacked the same relish she had before.

Also on a second note, I feel like they could've done the story without her having a child. I'm not completely through with the story yet so maybe it could improve, but they're not exactly the best parents. Obviously, each person has their flaws in parenting or whatever, but it's like they're completely neglectful. There's practically more sex scenes between the two of them rather than the two having a good relationship caring for their kid. It's also strange how a grown man (ML) is actively competing against a literal newborn. It's okay to get defensive and feel like a partner isn't giving you the attention you deserve after it's split, but it's just crazy to see someone fighting with their OWN kid for attention.

Overall, the story just started off pretty good and then fell off tbh. I wouldn't consider it a bad read, just that it's like meh.