tbh I wish official translations would do more t/n notes too!! like "my nervousness is inferior to a fart" is so fuckin funny, don't keep that from us
Yeah like LOL what does that even mean
how is it possible to hate every. single. character. this much??
ny thoughts exactly!!! not a single one is likable
"THE OTHER MAN REACTS WITH A NOSEBLEED, THE RAWEST FORM OF AWE."
poetry
And they said Shakespeare was dead.... I say nay
or is it like when i tell my bf we're married, because we told each other "there's only one way out of this," which is like saying "til death do us part" so we're *basically* married.
hottest vanilla sex scene i've read possibly ever?? *fans self*
is it ecofascist of me to expect the whole town to fall apart into unfettered chaos if Gyuwon dies and think it's better if the plot against him fails??
honestly I was on board for like 90% of this but wtf is that confession scene, it makes no sense for either character to talk like that.
here, i fix it:
jh: why didn't you tell me that it was all fake?
sj: because.... there was nothing to explain. it wouldn't have made a difference.
jh: what does that even mean?
sj: I'm not a good person.
jh: I don't care. I love you anyway!
sj: I'm allergic to that word. you don't love me, you just think you love me because you don't know me. that wasn't me in that particular video, but I've done stuff like that before.
jh: *agape with horror*
sj: see? I'm unlovable. go back to the hospital.
jh: *trudges back to the hospital sniffling*
sj: *closes the door, sighs deeply*
*before morning, realizes he can't live without changbin -- i mean, joohyun*
*runs to the hospital, gets into bed with jh, jh wakes up in sj's arms*
jh: sunbae, what are you doing here?
sj: i realized i can't live without you. i can't change my past, but i can change my future. i promise i'll never leave you and i'll protect you from the consequences of my past actions. *lays out his plan to actually do that and hold himself accountable*
idk i just feel like this would've been a better and more in-character exchange for them.
i desperately want this to be a story about Woonha healing Gyuwon's childhood trauma by giving him a safe space to get in touch with his buried anger+ aggression but i fear it's gonna be a story about Gyuwon teaching Woonha not to be such a hoe + accept gentleness/love.
gotta let this one marinate ╥﹏╥
no way she's a virgin, never thinks abou sex, has no idea what social norms are around sex and dating..... and doesn't have pubic hair
just sayin.