Reading a story where the characters are like not frontal lobe developed. Like watching these two thought process is like looking into the mind of a pure teen. If anything I’d have the same mentality as the seong hyung guy, son of the pastor.
It’s fresh seeing characters like this(mentally).
But I’d rather not see characters with this mindset anywhere else, or I would cry of cringe.
Maybe it’s because most writers write their characters already knowing what to do, but these two just have the mindsets of two clueless kids who’ve never had sex education and act like simpletons. They’re oblivious, plain, and act like ACTUAL SHELTERED CHILDREN who have never interacted out of the social norms of their own homes. Haha.
Very cute but like very concerning. I’m over here wondering if this is how the author thinks IRL cause damn. The way their thought process into making these two characters think is mind boggling.
Not to mention, I’m ngl the way the ML and the pastor son guy seong hyung guy just easily told each other what was on their minds while eating cake was just very teen mindset like
Like there were no mind games or anything, just cut tot he chase LOL
Cause some bitchass don’t wann send the Raws or them websites expire
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Not be some Yaoi slop. ‘Cause lowkey this story boring me out so far. Sex scenes aside. Dawn of the dragons made the sex scenes far more enjoyable. But off the bat, bros hitting him from the back ‘cause of mind control powers. Author gotta be on some next level boredom bullshit with this sloppy plot.
Only reading this ‘cause I wanna see where the author takes this story, but I’m hella boooorreddxdd.
This typa mind control plot ain’t nothing new but I really wanna see what this entity is before I drop this shit.
Youre acting like the top in DOTD didn't go into tentacle heat and fuck the bottom in like the 3rd chapter like idk either drop it or stop complaining
Oh, I will complain thank you very much for your unwanted opinion on my opinion. You wastin your own time tryna argue with people who Clearly don’t gaf whether this story’s plott is good or ass.
The difference with this and DOTD is the fact that it’s NOT FUCKING BORING.
And you busy wasting your time clearly reading shit you have no interest in and then boohooing about it in the comments like someones supposed to gaf like pack it up dummy
You should learn to read and actually think before responding. I clearly specified, that I’m only here cause I wanna see what the author does with the entity’s reveal. Then I’m dippin the hell outta here LMAO.
Ain’t nobody wasting my time. I can do this all day, everyday. You responding just, gonna make things more entertaining for me.
I still stand by what I said. NO FLAVOR IN THIS BIHHHH. Period.
And you a messy ho for tryna argue that it ain’t. Clearly you a freshling or something. You should read more, then you’d understand this travesty.
Are you dense? I wasnt arguing about whether it was boring or not. Nobody gaf about if you think its boring or not. Im saying get tf out the comments being the worlds loudest loser.
All that aave and you probably not even black. Fucking embarrassing