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Honestly match made is he'll but also what's with the pacing
I feel like confession cane way too soon it was embarrassing I thought it was a dream
And I get that they are supposed to match each other's obsessions which is fine but the development of their relationship felt rushed and bland
Then the second confession was also too fast
Honestly if the author made this longer or at least sorted out the pacing it would have been much better.
Very short
So bottom is someone who can see ghosts and exercise them through physical contact and the top is someone who is attracts ghosts for some reason
It was obvious where this was going but I didn't realise the guy was actually going to get possessed.
That whole part with the ghost was honestly disappointing and wished it didn't happen
On that note we only got one chapter of the top and bottom doing the deed - feel a little robbed
Also the childhood friend seemed to only be there for the plot. After he fulfilled his purpose he kind of just disappeared.
I do think this had a lot of potential and the pacing was good
Just wish it was longer