Honestly match made is he'll but also what's with the pacing
I feel like confession cane way too soon it was embarrassing I thought it was a dream
And I get that they are supposed to match each other's obsessions which is fine but the development of their relationship felt rushed and bland
Then the second confession was also too fast
Honestly if the author made this longer or at least sorted out the pacing it would have been much better.
I can't do this anymore
I finished season 4 and thought that was going to be the end of it
Why is there a season 5?
Im not going to bother reading it because why are you adding more drama
Please let them go
Start a new project
The boys are tired
Why couldn't they have just had their happy ending?
The pacing was pretty off for me
Dude gave me secondhand embarrassment at that start.
The artstyle also makes them seem incredibly young
I know it's a short story but some things didn't really land the way they should have.
For example we find out only later that the uke only liked the guys voice and not him. It wasn't very clear considering he accepted the confession.
Also after the confession it didn't seem like they were a couple.
They never even went on a date the entire manhwa
Even the whole partners thing for school had me stressed because they were talking about but we only have one chapter of them doing any work on their assignment.
It felt a little boring at times to the point I was excited when the sister played the recording. It honestly felt like they were running in circles with the amount of misunderstandings going on in one story...
Could have done without the childhood thing - why can't the uke just be someone who likes a hero? Why do they have to add so much lore to it?
I do like that it was short and that they finally managed to resolve the misunderstandings.
So ones a red flag and the other is colourblind
Not only is the top a liar but he also manipulates the bottom by using baby language while the bottom is clearly weak when it comes to rejecting the top
I guess since they are childhood friends the top knows exactly what to do to get the bottom to say yes or at least to give in
He cried and whines and usually I like crybaby tops but his was clearly a manipulation tactic.
I did find it a major red flag that at the beginning the top wouldnt stop no matter how many times the bottom said no
He knew exactly what he was doing to make the bottom compromise on how far they can go
I would have like the bottom to call him out on his behaviour sooner
Side stories would have been nice as well
I did enjoy the manhwa just because it is funny at times
In conclusion I didn't hate this but I would liked it more if the top wasn't a beaming red flag
Didn't really like the SA at the start but i liked how their relationship developed
The top is more than just possessive but i like that he's making an effort i suppose. But the bottom is such a bird
Like what do you mean you're still with him after everything he's done.
The problems didn't even start from the SA as adults, he literally kissed you when you were students and framed you for things that could have gotten you expelled
Also i didn't like that we needed this other guy to act as an asshole just so that we'd want the top to be endgame
I get that the story is about them misunderstanding each other or at least the bottom misunderstanding the top but i dont think that excused some of the behaviour.
I do like that we got to see some back story for the top but i think the author could have done more and explored that part of his character more
Anyway they did end up matching each other by the end and really liked the side stories
Both are toxic
One has an unhealthy obsession while the other already has one foot out of the door and lies.
It's an interesting premise where they can't truly die, but I would have liked it to be longer so we could explore it more cause I have a few questions
For example do they only come back when they are murdered by each other? Also why is it that the tops body was left behind?
Anyway this is one of that stories where you can't fully choose a side but the characters are well thought out. It's not all black and white where one person is good and one person is bad, both have flaws that we can understand.
There is no way these two will ever have a healthy and functioning relationship if neither of them change - even if one of them makes an effort to change, if the other behaves the same nothing will change
Anyway would have liked it more if it was longer but i also like the open ending
Im glad they were to clarify their relationship however I dont get why this couldn't be done in the main story
Why did the side stories have to be wasted
I feel like there was a lot of potential for this story however because it's so short there wasn't enough space to develop their relationship. Their relationship progressed too quickly and it was with the help of a stalker - not sure how i feel about that
Also the fact that the uke clearly has more experience and used that to his advantage while the seme was a virginity at the start, it would have nice if the uke set the record straight from beginning.
This was nice
No toxic characters and communication
I love how their relationship progressed and developed from strangers to friends to lovers
I really like how short this is and kept the drama to a minimum rather than dragging it with a miscommunication or break up arc
I do wonder however about the ghosts
Will it be recurring thing for them to try to help the ghosts pass on
And even if it's not it would have been nice to know more about how he is able to see ghosts or even about his childhood
Writer × Actor
Enjoyed the story
It was entertaining and funny
One thing I hate is why are authors in love the amnesia trope in the side stories!? I almost threw my phone out the window!!!ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
TBF is was entertaining watching their dynamic and I really liked the other actor
I think what I liked the most is that I felt secure the relationship felt even when the top had amnesia. (At least for me it didn't seem like they were going to split/break up. Yes the top kicked him out and the coworker seemed like a threat but that also felt entertaining rather than threatening)
Other than that my only other thing is why don't they switch?
Clearly the bottom.has wanted to be on top from the start, so why can't switching be a thing in this?
Either way loved the art style and the story wasn't bad
It wasn't too quick but thank goodness it didn't drag either
Very short
So bottom is someone who can see ghosts and exercise them through physical contact and the top is someone who is attracts ghosts for some reason
It was obvious where this was going but I didn't realise the guy was actually going to get possessed.
That whole part with the ghost was honestly disappointing and wished it didn't happen
On that note we only got one chapter of the top and bottom doing the deed - feel a little robbed
Also the childhood friend seemed to only be there for the plot. After he fulfilled his purpose he kind of just disappeared.
I do think this had a lot of potential and the pacing was good
Just wish it was longer