there really is no point in having a 2nd ml when the story is so short. should've just went with the classic "mc starts to avoid the ml on his own which makes the ml realize his feelings". a 2nd ml is only satisfying when the story is long enough to build up the idea of a potential relationship. it's just kinda cringe in this scenario because he has no hope in the first place.
i dont like drunk sex scenes (unless both are drunk, then that's hot lol), but yeomin couldnt have at least been cute, giggly, touchy AWAKE kinda drunk? he was just straight up asleep
i know ppl get annoyed by others applying "real morals" to fiction, but if i'm reading smth that's supposed to he a smutty romance (romance as in, the two characters eventually enter a relationship), i do NAWT wanna see one of the characters take advantage of the other one, particularly during sex. it's always so uncomfortable and unnecessary.
but at the same time, i guess it's also in character for what's his face (icb i genuinely forgot his name already). he's been a shitty lover, so it's really not surprising.
i knew this was going to be a conflict. i mean, it was obvious, but still. i'm interested in seeing how horrific doha is going to get with bada determined to get out of the game. a part of me feels like bada is going to end up trapped in the game & forced to be with doha (and i say forced, but what i'm really speculating is that he'll "fall in love").
either that, or bada gets out in the nick of time and all the characters end up being real people, and he gets put in that situation again, but in real life this time. and doha will probably remember him.









started reading this for horny reasons but now i'm invested in the plot lmao