Swan Lake

I'll get the chapters out as fast as I can, so sit tight! ^^

Right now, I only have the raws up to Chapter 12, but there are actually 15 chapters out. (This series is serialized in ihr Hertz magazine.) I'd be incredibly grateful if anyone could help me get the raws for Chapter 13 onward! Otherwise, we'll just have to wait for the third compiled volume to drop.

I also want to send a huge thank you to wistal, NaruHinaDis, and pear for providing the raws I'm currently working with. Be sure to send them some love too!

Peace

Hello everyone,
I'm the translator of this manga.

I don’t usually comment on the projects I work on, but I wanted to address a recent discussion regarding a specific line that some readers found problematic.

The line in question is "possessing skin of pure innocence."

In the original Japanese, the phrase is 清らかな肌を持ち, which literally translates to "having pure, clean skin." It has nothing to do with skin tone or color. Instead, it refers to his skin being unblemished, both because Mirza isn't allowed out in the sun and stays cooped up inside, and because he doesn't perform any strenuous manual labor that would damage it. Furthermore, he is continuously pampered, bathed, and tended to by attendants who treat him as a living deity.

I chose to translate this as "skin of pure innocence" to draw a parallel to a child’s skin, whose youth embodies absolute purity and innocence. Young children have flawless, soft skin unaffected by harsh conditions or heavy labor. I wanted to capture all of these nuances in just a few words, while keeping the tone poetic and fitting for a classic fairytale fantasy.

I sincerely apologize if my choice of words misrepresented the author’s intentions or caused any misunderstanding. If you have any suggestions on how to refine this line, I would be more than happy to hear them and update the panel accordingly.

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Also, while I hadn't originally planned to speak on this, since I am already leaving a comment, I wanted to share my personal take on the manga's title and the concerns surrounding the "barbarian" trope.

I completely understand why readers are uncomfortable with this term. In the real world, it has historically been used to convey ignorance and bigotry, and to dehumanize people. It makes total sense that seeing it applied to a darker-skinned character raises immediate red flags for a lot of you.

In manga and manhwa, the 'barbarian' archetype is a common storytelling device. It's generally used to represent an outsider culture with a focus on raw strength. If you look across the medium, this trope is actually applied to character designs regardless of skin tone. Examples like Mending the Barbaric Prince's Wounds, Barbarian Quest, Virgin Slave Barbarian King, The Bride of Barbaroi, or A Barbarian's Adventure in a Fantasy World, demonstrate how widely it's applied to light-skinned fantasy leads as well.

However, even within that trope, I wouldn't defend its usage in this specific narrative if not for the fact that the author's underlying intention is to deconstruct and condemn the label itself.

A reader in the comments summed it up perfectly: the title isn't the objective truth. Just as Mirza isn't actually a "Goddess," Asura isn't a "Barbarian." The title reflects the bias of the corrupt society within the story. It delves into how power structures use language to reshape reality and control the masses. The temple needs Mirza to be a deity to justify keeping him captive, and they need Asura to be a barbarian to justify their fear and hostility.

I’d also draw a comparison to Mo Dao Zu Shi (Grandmaster of Demonic Cultivation / The Founder of Diabolism), which I assume most people here are familiar with given its popularity across the novel, donghua, and manhua.
The title explicitly labels the main character, Wei Wuxian, using terms like "Demonic." Yet, the entire plot revolves around how society unfairly demonized him based on prejudice, jealousy and fear. The author put their hateful label right in the title to expose their malice.

This manga does the exact same thing. As you read, it becomes crystal clear who the real barbarians are. (Though I do lament that because this manga is so short, it won't be able to explore all the intricacies of this situation as deeply as a novel would, but it still successfully hits the core message).

That being said, do I think the title was the wisest choice for an international audience? Given the valid backlash, it is clear that more subtle terminology might have been preferable today to avoid causing initial hurt.

You are all welcome to share your thoughts. Everyone's opinion and sensibilities matter, and I will be reading your comments. Let’s keep the discussion open, respectful, and free of hate speech. Spread peace and love!