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The story is kind of…bland.
First of all I wish she was actually blind, what’s the point of making her blind if she has the Byakugan on 24/7.
Second the hiding power thing and taking abuse from others is getting old, it’s gonna come out out regardless because she doesn’t even hide it that well.
Branding a new born babies forhead with hot metal is INSANE. I get it’s their custom but I would not be so chill after that, I would be mad as hell. She’s being treated worse than a commoner or slave, they don’t walk around with big ass brands on their forehead.
Also she is an ultimate dumbass for actually forgetting that god gave her powers, but the way she wasted so much POINTS. She put nothing in magic, and didn’t even really get strength because she’s only strong with that bird sword. So she actually wasted an opportunity to be a well rounded character.
It’s just a mess of a story.