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I feel like the writing for this comic has started to feel lazy. It's definitely hard to describe... the first season just felt so much different, more fresh. The social dynamics felt more connected, even the world felt more magical.
Then again, this could just be because the scale of everything is so much bigger now, so there isn't as much focus on the small details?
Actually, yeah. I think because we have SOOO many things going on (off the top of my head: Sejun trapped in the tower, Theo's merchant journey, rebuilding the bunny kingdom, Iona's nightmares, the pests, the businessman who wants to replicate Sejun's tomatoes, the dynamic of dragons between towers, and now the fact Sejun might be able to travel between towers), it feels like ADHD because dialogue gets to truncated and cut off at times by other imposing characters.
I understand this but can’t explain it either. I’m still seeing slice of life but it’s kind of.. forced? In the beginning, I liked it for the cute animals and the dynamics between them. However, now it honestly feels like human interaction but dressed up as animals
I just think it would’ve been better to keep it as slice of life entirely. The political aspects and serious side stories that suddenly became the main focus - it made the story feel like a drag to read. Especially since everyone started reading this for a comfort atmosphere
I really just love every time Chloe is on screen, it's like the artist(s) just go "okay how can we make her look like a moody and lamenting goddess" and then she's standing there obliterating the show. I LOVE YOU CHLOE AND COCO please just continue being adorable and living happily