Its such a minor thing.. but for the love of god pelase stop crying and wimpering in every scene.
It just feels so unecessary, and also kind of shitty writing? Like the cry baby is always the bottom. Sometimes they can write a cry baby in a good way, but this just feels like "He tried to prove to his family, but all he does it cry (and like not even try to persevere)". You know??
I'm still going to read it, but for the love of god stop crying in every single chapter. OR SITUATION.
Ok dude, geez I'm sorry for being a crybaby and a pussy I guess, but do you even see the situation-?(This sounds condecending, I'm not trying to sound condecending TT) 'situation' is an understatement, I'd be crying and going into despair and peeing my pants(not embarrassing, happened while getting beaten up by someone more bigger, so imagine this circumstances).
Broski this isn't even a tiger or an animal we know, but just worser and scarier than a polor bear, and in a dame isolated, PROBABLY MOST LIKELY(I'm not like angry or yelling dw) with no way back to normal human life, regular life, I can't explain it properly, but yes, I'd be already having mental breakdowns mid way after being in denial if not, thinking knowing I can't, ever, never, go back.
Anyways have a nice day, No but seriously please don't take this as me like saying, oh you can't hate a crybaby, oh you're rude yadayada, I cuss at myself for crying too much. I'm just ranting I think what's it called, not angry again, or irritated just wanted to comment this.
Enjoy your bl though:3











I want him so badly to be the ML