So amazing that I need him to be the true love interest. He's a real man that protects and loves women! I feel like if he got to the FL first then he could've been the real love interest.
Here are a few gripes and I dont hate the story because the art is beautiful but it has to be totally fictional because there are many plot holes that take you out the story. Don't get me wrong it's entertaining but....
I think someone said it best in the comments about how making him the future king is troublesome. Even the ML mother has given up on hope for him but the King, the ML father I know he loves his son but it's illogical to have two sons and act as though the first son, the ML is the only option for king when he isn't capable of being one and the second son is.
He's not mentally there and I hate that the plot is that the FL is meant to "heal his wounds and make me a better person through love~" when he needs serious psychiatric help. They know he's a killer and is unstable and leaves her alone with him and puts her in danger.
They know he's capable of harming others and keep going along with him being in situations that their own citizens can get harmed from him but still do it. She trips over everything not once or twice like the cliche way to further their progress along, but EVERY SINGLE TIME she trips and he catches her. It's been like four or five times it's up to chapter 28.
Her parents claim to dote on her and love her while threatening nobody would harm her, but when they saw the violence her betrothed showcased at a party, they didn't snatch her away and annul the betrothal.
The family has generational debt but are relatively doing fine because they farm but the FL feels the need to still stay with the ML even though she really doesn't have to but has grown attached to him very quickly. He's harmed her once before and she has to constantly make sure he doesn't harm others, thus putting herself into harms way multiple times.
It's just goofy. To be totally honest, it would've been a much better story if we just had the ML story of his kidnapping and growing up as an assassin. It would give off a Vinland saga feel of that were the case.
I don't know but I'll continue to read it cause it's not bad but it's not logical and when reading this all logic has to go out the window and you have to turn your brain off and just enjoy the art and her tripping all over the place I guess. Lol
Everytime I open a new chapter, I expect nothing and get nothing. Why do we care about the ex at this point? Why do good stories go south like this? The bondservant, where the heart is, midnight poppylan and and like numerous others. It's like the authors forget what they were writing and just throw anything in. So frustrating cause usually these have the best art too
Ikr! Your comment made me also think of For Your Murder. ML was smart, cold, calculating and in the last few chapters the author suddenly rushed the ending. ML did a 180 becoming a foolish loser. It was so out of character it destroyed the whole narrative. I was so hyped for this story but now I'll pretend I never read it.
I have no idea what's going on atm with these authors... it wasn't like that before, was it?
It's like they get bored or something. Maybe they lose the passion for it or something idk
Maxi being protected and loved like this makes my heart jump for joy. There can never be any Riftan slander to me because I know he is a REAL man. He doesn't hold back protecting or loving her and that's why he's my fave.
This had so much potential and the story went off the rails. None of it is logical and just bizarre.
He's tryna tell you he's a grown man now! Playtime is over lol