Everytime I open a new chapter, I expect nothing and get nothing. Why do we care about the ex at this point? Why do good stories go south like this? The bondservant, where the heart is, midnight poppylan and and like numerous others. It's like the authors forget what they were writing and just throw anything in. So frustrating cause usually these have the best art too
Ikr! Your comment made me also think of For Your Murder. ML was smart, cold, calculating and in the last few chapters the author suddenly rushed the ending. ML did a 180 becoming a foolish loser. It was so out of character it destroyed the whole narrative. I was so hyped for this story but now I'll pretend I never read it.
I have no idea what's going on atm with these authors... it wasn't like that before, was it?
It's like they get bored or something. Maybe they lose the passion for it or something idk
Maxi being protected and loved like this makes my heart jump for joy. There can never be any Riftan slander to me because I know he is a REAL man. He doesn't hold back protecting or loving her and that's why he's my fave.
This had so much potential and the story went off the rails. None of it is logical and just bizarre.
I've been waiting! Whoop his ass Riftan!!!! Omg the way I screamed and cried seeing this!!!! My boy!!!
Make them see each other and the one lead is an adult beforehand. Like can we have two consenting adults and he never knew her as a child? Him not holding her as a child would've been Way better. It comes off so creepy and it doesn't have to be.
I feel that his parents and what needed to be punished. They locked her up for days while she suffered pregnant. They beat her and her husband. Ain't no way they're gonna just sit there acting like her parents aren't the worse either. Holding the baby and crap. Smh
Y'all make the shit so miserable. Attacking each other for opinions, saying he's an abuser and spoiling stuff without even a warning. Like are y'all ok? We can't have any community cause of how extreme everyone acts all the time.
(And don't bother coming with the bs to me cause I'm not gonna read any rude comments or give you any attention. Imma block you then move on)
I literally just addressed this in another post too. You're not alone observation or feeling. There are way too many people on here who are either unhealed, ignorant, or inexperienced in life , but have the strongest and most aggressive opinions and feelings on everything. And what's worse is that they attack people for not sharing their view. Way too many people in this comment section need therapy and education.
Exactly! The aggression and I mean the spoilers really pissed me the f off because this is supposed to be community. I read this and love this book and I wanna share how I feel but people are projecting the heck out of their RL in the characters.
Here are a few gripes and I dont hate the story because the art is beautiful but it has to be totally fictional because there are many plot holes that take you out the story. Don't get me wrong it's entertaining but....
I think someone said it best in the comments about how making him the future king is troublesome. Even the ML mother has given up on hope for him but the King, the ML father I know he loves his son but it's illogical to have two sons and act as though the first son, the ML is the only option for king when he isn't capable of being one and the second son is.
He's not mentally there and I hate that the plot is that the FL is meant to "heal his wounds and make me a better person through love~" when he needs serious psychiatric help. They know he's a killer and is unstable and leaves her alone with him and puts her in danger.
They know he's capable of harming others and keep going along with him being in situations that their own citizens can get harmed from him but still do it. She trips over everything not once or twice like the cliche way to further their progress along, but EVERY SINGLE TIME she trips and he catches her. It's been like four or five times it's up to chapter 28.
Her parents claim to dote on her and love her while threatening nobody would harm her, but when they saw the violence her betrothed showcased at a party, they didn't snatch her away and annul the betrothal.
The family has generational debt but are relatively doing fine because they farm but the FL feels the need to still stay with the ML even though she really doesn't have to but has grown attached to him very quickly. He's harmed her once before and she has to constantly make sure he doesn't harm others, thus putting herself into harms way multiple times.
It's just goofy. To be totally honest, it would've been a much better story if we just had the ML story of his kidnapping and growing up as an assassin. It would give off a Vinland saga feel of that were the case.
I don't know but I'll continue to read it cause it's not bad but it's not logical and when reading this all logic has to go out the window and you have to turn your brain off and just enjoy the art and her tripping all over the place I guess. Lol