Ok that’s it, no more seasons. You get 59 chapters and if you can’t write a good ending, don’t even write the start.
I don’t think most readers really want a fleshed out story with complicated characters and motivations. Yall just want sex, consensual or non-consensual, calling the mc who has been tortured and abused this entire story a “whore” is absolutely wild. Go back to reading Jinx or sm
Jinx readers vs having more than one brain cell challenge: impossible
Was ash always so manipulative? Cause like he only tries to push Lyle instead of trying to meet him halfway.
i love ash he one of my favorite tops but he has ALWAYSSS been manipulative like i been peeped that he was since the beginning i love him tho it’s just the personality that i can’t get past sometimes
Yeah he just has puppy eyes lol if you go back and read he literally manipulated Carlisle into moving in with him
yeah he’s been like this since the beginning ngl . hes a manipulative guy it’s just not obvious bc karlyle is usually fine with what he wants i feel like
For the first time ever I’m like….maybe we could’ve skipped the extras. They are really adding nothing.
(Mostly pissed ash didn’t say “I’m sorry” too, cause like how you going to bring your gossipy friends into your house and hurt your s/o’s feelings and then be mad at HIM for not coming to confront you)
I don't think he knew his friends were going to be gossipy and remember when he tried to communicate karlyle just cut him off .
they did it in front of him the first time and he pulled one of them to the side in secret so theyd stop bringing hazel up.. ill admit lyle was closing himself off again after the fact but ash was absolutely knew what was going on especially bc he never even told his friend hazel was a cheater and thats why theyre not together
Side stories gonna make me lower my rating lmao. We let ash get away with too much just cause he wasn’t a r@pist (im kidding of course but damn these chaps are downers)
Sob stories don’t excuse bad behavior, I don’t care about this character at all. I only skimmed his other chapters cause he made my skin crawl
i found my people
I need a character sheet and a family tree, all the J names keep getting mixed up in my head!
I dropped this at the end of season 1, but I check the comments regularly. It’s both funny and INSANE that it’s at 80+ chapters and we still don’t know who is end game. This is gonna be 200 chapters with no development and then at the end everyone gets hit by a truck lmao
so real, the story is not progressing at all