And to think he has no clue what was just up his ass.
The way I went "aweee" at "vials of cum" says something. I don't know what it says. But it's something.
Because I believe in ukes getting what they want supremacy
https://archiveofourown.org/works/88087481
Rollercoaster of emotions ass chapter. A time and a place author. Why is there heavy shit in my smut and smut in the heavy shit. It doesn't give anything the proper attention it deserves.
But also the primary issue, at least in my opinion, is that an opportunity for character growth is cast aside.
So Gjord's obsessive and horny and in love. That's all cute and fine. Problem is, it's not as though he's like that 100% of the time—he's also caring and protective! At this moment in the story, it would make sense to show some more facets of his character, but instead we get...this.
Sylhan literally goes from taking Lister's shit talk to trying to stab him for it. It's not like the author doesn't know what character development is. Apparently Gjord doesn't get to have any :)
Gjord really must have been under the influence of “dark powers” or something, we clearly see it in the last chapter.
The author is really scanty when it comes to panels. I'm pretty sure Sylhan actually got to eat (it seemed so odd I checked the novel lol), or if not maybe he'll get to afterward, but I noticed they kind of skip around awkwardly especially in smut scenes and seem to think the audience will just. Get what they mean.
Could you please share a linke to the novel?
I agree that pacing is a bit off
Yes, in the novel he had a full meal of his favorites before the sex.
Sylhan seeing a dragon in place of Gjord in chapter 29 and it not being a hallucination makes a lot of sense now.
THAT IS YOUR KNIGHT. GO OFF MY LIEGE. MAIM AND MURDER.
I feel so stupid for not realizing. In my defense, stranger plots have happened okay.
lolololol here i was awaiting a whole 30 chapters to see the real ian
Pulling out that sob story minutes after pulling out of him is crazy work
I feel like in a lot of stories where a character is suffering mentally, their illness only props up when it can be a plot point.
One thing I like about Antidote is that it's ever present and not just a tool to conveniently cause problems. It interrupts the good and the bad, and it's not magically fixed once he has enough dick.
I hope his condition improves further, and I'm looking forward to learning about their backstory ^^