Someone update me once their relationships actually progress
Jaekyung crying cause soon he won’t have anyone to abuse
The pacing you set at the beginning of a story is ultimately the one you have to follow through with.
That means across all arcs and points, all the way to the end. If you suddenly jump the gun at a turning point, the story loses depth and texture, and that’s why we see these exaggerated reactions from Jaekyung right now. There are not enough ‘meaningful reasons’ for him to be scared for Kim Dan. Specifically because it’s not been built properly.
At one point; the story started acting more like a series of events, instead of a story with any groundwork for realistic characterization, which is what we ALL want.
Yes, there are other issues with this Manhwa, but this was my TED talk for today. Lmao have a good evening.
Bro
Take this from this manhwa: never rush your slowburn plot when it gets to the point where a character is about to change. And ESPECIALLY not like this
This is garbage narrative writing, but oh well I’m still here