The story starts becoming rushed somewhere around chapter 60 and the ending is very rushed and disappointing.
The relationship between evan and that blonde guy was unexpected and felt a bit forced.
There were somethings plot wise i wanted to see be delved into more , i wanted to see what Kyle's first reaction was when he found out Adrian was a ghoul but that was kept vague.
Although Evan was the antagonist of the story i did feel a bit pity for him.
Overall it was a good story but near the end it becomes so rushed that the story feels half-completed.
The author suffered health problems and stress partly due to p-i-r-a-c-y of her manhwa and loss of i-n-c-o-m-e with readers like us and sites like this. She was hospitalized as a result, was so over it, and was keen to finish it quickly for her own health and sanity. That's why it's rushed.
Lol, can't believe you're still judging on the illegal site
Wtf is your problem? And why are you targeting my post out of all the other topics when mine is mostly positive, is it because you know the others would rightfully go tell you to go KYS.
Now don't be a hypocritical cụnt when i can see your over 100+ topics on the stories you read on this "illegal" site. And i can also see that other persons topics too of them shitting on other stories.
Idc if people shit on this manhwa, it's my guilty pleasure. Also most are hypocrites acting like other stories they read don't have a size difference too.
They do but it's not as jarring and even then they would still complain lol. Normal shit
As someone who read the short story version first (6 chapters) what's the difference between this one (serialised) and the shorter one?
I don't think it's the same story tho
the plot is different?
This is basically a continuation
In the Raws is all together the same story ...
It’s the same story altogether. The author just decided to continue it. Originally the story concluded with Hayden taking Brett’s hand so they could fuck in chapter 6. I think it was a smart choice on the author’s part to continue, so now we can see more of Brett and Hayden as characters, as well as dive into their motivations more.
Continuation after Hayden accepted brett offer.
The story has been lacking and deteriorating since halfway season 2 and these new chapters just make me want to drop it.
The other commenter who said ''The story went from being a little fun comedy commentary of the ludicrosity of the yaoi genre to taking itself wayyyyyyyy too seriously and turning into the thing it was making fun of.'' IS 100% RIGHT.
This went from a funny smutty story with decent art to a story that doesn't know in what direction it is going in, the plot feels jumbled now, and at this point we are all tired of the archmage and yeol (who's art got twinkified) . The mc has become a even bigger doormat.
the male lead is 37. The mc is 27 and the ML said he is 10 years older than him so that would make him 37
im so confused on how they randomly jumped in a relationship in chapter 3. Like the previous chapter there was no relationship and suddenly they are randomly having sex and are together after chap 3...
I love reading your theories in the comments and here is mine:
I have the feeling that one of the characters as in male leads is responsible for the MC ending up in the novel world and i also feel that Argio, Purple hair and the South Demin probably know something that they are hiding from the MC, i wonder if one of them knows he is not the real hero.
(i miss the old art before they twinkified yoel, prayur circle for author to bring back the old art back)
This site has some of the most cancerous pickme BL userbase so if you want to read normal discussions about this story you can go on bat0 since the almost all of these stories ate aggregated from bat0.
fuck i meant *are not *ate, where is auto-correct when you need it.
I love how everyone reading this story shares the same frustrations with it. Like we are sharing our collective conscious.
Like we are all still reading this story because we loved season 1 and formed a habit of reading it so now no matter how bad the plot gets or the art changes we still continue reading. Tbh i think things are starting to get good now though since it looks like Argio knows the reason why Mc might have gotten isekaid here and the original hero has showed up. I just need mc to spend less time with ben and yoel though . Like they've had too much screen-time atp.