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While there's definitely some valid criticism, I think a lot of y'all are forgetting that at the end of the day you are reading smut.
Yeah, it's story based porn but at the end of the day you're holding way too high of standards for gay porn that's written to be an unrealistic fantasy for mostly women lol
Crying begging on my knees that they actually switch and that one sex scene wasn't just switch baiting....
I feel like this author could pull it off so well and itd be so hot