While there's definitely some valid criticism, I think a lot of y'all are forgetting that at the end of the day you are reading smut.
Yeah, it's story based porn but at the end of the day you're holding way too high of standards for gay porn that's written to be an unrealistic fantasy for mostly women lol
Not trying to be a hater, I honestly just checked in from time to time to skim thru and read the smut...but I feel like they dragged so many meaningless sideplots just to have her get pregnant and give birth within 3 chapters??
We could've seen the intentional baby making sex, pregnancy sex, etc....and also just story wise its a huge life event to just speed through like that? Interesting choice









Crying begging on my knees that they actually switch and that one sex scene wasn't just switch baiting....
I feel like this author could pull it off so well and itd be so hot