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Underwhelming, clanky dialogue, over explanations, reactions that don’t fit, poor use of panelling… usually what has for these types going is either the tension or sex, but here neither are present. Just bad

Find it funny how it ties back to how yeseol said “your truths are jokes and your lies are serious” cause at the beginning it clearly seemed like a sly joke when he said they slept tgt with “you just gonna toss me after sleeping with me?” But later on was serious with “no we didn’t”… cute detail

Perfect example of slop manhwa . The story is minimal, the characters are fine, and it’s mostly just sex. While it’s debatable whether one can consider their beginning to be in a weird grey area where it’s mayhaps SA, it’s fine if you like lighthearted, not plot heavy smut with a cute romance.

Slop rating of 7/10

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If yall want spoilers
They parted their ways. Both looked back as they did but neither saw each other, and they also decided to not see each other or at least that’s what it feels like with both sayin “thank you” to each other as if they’re parting. They have an awkward hug and leave. It’s very bittersweet, Satomi is getting over Kyouji and Kyouji is being an adult and not chasing back. I think.. guys.. the next work won’t be related to this story and this is the end, they had a thing and then they didn’t anymore, and that’s all.

I wish the characters were more fleshed out, I know the author usually does “porn with a side plot” but cmon. What do we know about mc? That he had a dog? Okay… his personality? He just smiles and goes along with everything.. at least the ml has a personality that all other characters in the authors story which is being a pathetic, wimpy kid in a way who is good to the mc but is pretty rude to others. I wish the author just tried to actualise a story instead of drawing so much smut, all their stories are like this :/ their artstyle is good so I don’t know why.

Anyways the story is cute I guess, I like the idea of the pathetic ml who is subservient given how he sees any love interest as a correlation to his childhood, ie, he has major abandonment issues, I could guess he had a bad childhood from chapter one with the way he was being all over the mc. The mc is so boring tho. Like boiled chicken, cmon, give us personality, backstory anything that isn’t just being “in love” with the ml.

I liked the abo au better than the main sorry cause at least it had a plot, and I wanted to see more of it esp with the comments and how they get thru it. The ml seems the type to become more “psychotic” to outsiders, so that’d be fun, but so far we haven’t seen this. But I can guess most of the plot cause the author regurgitates the same concepts in all their stories.

5/10, but as smut with little plot 8/10

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