5/10
what that was it???? i didn't even get to see them lovey dovey??? and what's this shallow romance?? the story was really unique but poorly executed. everything was rushed. there's no time to breath becuz after 1 problem is solved, another one pops up. becuz of that there's no time for romance to be inserted. there's some blushing here and there but nothing that really puts you emotionally. besides, there's so many things that wasn't even tackled or atleast gave closure to. damn what a wasted opportunity. this could've been better if it was fleshed out more maybe 50-100 more chapters to properly develop each characters and their respective relationships. well guess its fun as a light read to pass time but not really something that sticks or memorable
idk if its just me but i dont like how they executed the romance part of this. i dont usually nitpick confessions such as this becuz im not that hard to please as a reader. but the way the story leads to the confession lacks so much build up. im only reading the manhwa version so idk how it was like in the novel. but my opinion still stands. this lacks so much more that i actually think the art is wasted on such bad pacing. i dont think there's enough backstory for them to be in love with each. there's not much interaction either. im just looking for that justification. the confession feels so rushed. its like the romance is being forced. dont get me wrong, the story is really good. the art as well. i just have qualms in the progression of their romance. i personally think this could've been done better
ive always been a fan of good confessions. but this one is just not it. but regardless, the story is good so i wont drop this immediately
Omg fr, I was trying hard to dig deeper thru the context of the story but I just can't put a finger why I don't get why the ml loves the fl. I'm not nitpicking the fl or anything, it's just that you don't really fall in love with anyone just because they bested you at something (and also killed you and everyone around you) or you saw them once in a party. Is it a sword-enthusiast thing? It feels lackluster in the romance dept
omg this is exactly how I feel! you get me! I guess I can kinda understand why Echinecea might have fallen since Yurien was the one person that kept believing in her, but Yurien? I just don’t get it… Sure he could’ve been interested/curious during the banquet, but then, what else? The next time he hears about her, he makes her his squire and just immediately orders a sword for her—because he likes her already? It just seems a little forced lol. I like this manhwa but it would’ve been so much better if the romance storyline made more sense. On that note, I like Yurien’s character don’t get me wrong, but I think she has better chemistry and buildup with both Varaha and Alice instead. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭





oh my god this is the best!!! I've been looking for a manhwa just like this. its too bad there's not much chapters yet. i love everything about the fmc she's strong-willed, puts in the effort, & isn't actually a damsel in distress. i really like the scammer & fmc's dynamics despite the scammer having chuunibyu tendencies lmao