This story is moving at the speed of light omg. It has had more development in 12 chapters than most stories cover in 40. There are so many points that you just need to accept and move on. You can’t even get hung up on one issue because they will introduce another issue and then solve it three pages later. It’s like whiplash.
Why did they make her so skinny? Give the poor girl some muscle. She got them chicken legs
I did laugh out loud when I saw the camo uniform ngl. It’s not even that deep, it’s just so out of place lol
Lmfaooo this story is wild. Sion murders her in 5 different lives. And in some lives he systematically hunts her down, which makes the whole love story so much worse. Why does the author set up this tragic beginning just to basically throw it out the window??? Did the author get bored and just wanted to draw the romantic moments? None of it feels earned. If you don’t want to explore trauma, that’s fine,but don’t write your story with a FL who is murdered several times over by one person. You could have picked tamer events to mark the beginning of their relationship and this story wouldn’t be all over the place. Gosh golly the fact she thinks she owes him makes me want to baja blast myself into the sun. Wtf
Honestly it feels like the story can move forward now that the whole reveal is done. I know it’s been said again and again, but this reveal should have happened100 chapters ago. The story couldn’t move forward without the reveal so it was just meandering around until a couple chapters ago. Like yes Selena and Ignis did get some character development, sure but the story was stagnant for the longest time. It now feels like the story is progressing towards the end.
Didn’t the mom also ignore Shushu when the father was alive???? I guess she could at least stand to sight of Shushu before the husband’s death. So like on one hand, I get the tremendous loss but on the other, I’m pretty sure you ignored your child ever since she was born. I have just about the same amount of sympathy as I do dad’s tormenting their own child because his wife died in childbirth, which is none.
Author thank you so much for letting me read such a wonderful story! I’m going to miss this series so much! Please give us all the side stories!
So they are having loud ass sex in the middle of the house. Isn’t her mom just sitting upstairs? Like deadass moms gonna walk downstairs and see him breaking her back like that?
Bro really didn’t just say “why do you hate me?” Dawg, I cant. The same dude that tortured and then killed her love interest. He proceeded to show his work to her like he’s proud of it! He’s asking why she hates him? Good lord.
Man what a bad sex scene. RIP Sung’s asshole. No prep + no lube = a not very fun time. Bro really did just stick his dick with his head empty, no thoughts.
Damn you can land a plane on that flat ass runway of a head of his
Celestine’s girl has a giant forehead omg I couldn’t focus on anything else
Misunderstandings/lack of communication can work in stories only if they are not heavily relied upon to drive the narrative forward. This story relies on misunderstandings far too much. I am of the opinion that if your only conflicts come from a series of misunderstandings or just lack of character communication, this is lazy writing. This most recent chapter annoyed me because she could have easily cleared the air by mentioning she was going party with Spencer only because she struck a deal with her annoying brother. It would have immediately solved the brewing conflict and their relationship could advance in a good direction. Instead she doesn't tell him the reason and then proceeds to find him a date. To me, this is incredibly lazy writing to cause more conflict in the story just to prolong the development of their relationship. I did think this concept could be a fun and lighthearted read but it is bogged down by infuriating conflicts that could be resolved in a two minute conversation between the FL and the ML. As they say, the number 1 enemy of all shoujo is just miscommunication. Bruh just TALK to each other.
Here I am once again saying, talk to each other. I beg. If they just have a 10 minute conversation with each other, 90% of their problems would disappear.
I’ve come to very much dislike mind control stories. My issues stem from the fact that there is the overarching villain and everything else seems to be swept under the rug. Like I get it, they wouldn’t have acted the way they do unless they were controlled but my complicated feelings stay. Edith’s suffering was still there and done by their hands(albeit through the control of the author). And that’s what doesn’t sit well with me. Even if she understands that this wasn’t their actions, it still sucks for her since she had to live through the abuse the author made her feel. Like it’s a super complicated feeling because, again, I know that this isn’t their faults but damn it sucks. I’m left feeling so torn up about who I like and who I don’t like. Ultimately, this is just my brain telling me that I probably do not like mind control stories since it makes shrouds the entirely story in moral shades of grey.
The author really wants to get to the smut portion, good lord. Lol I thought I missed something again with another ding dong jump scare! Also why are a good portion of these characters major assholes for no good reason? MC hasn’t done anything to anyone and gets the short end of the stick every time. Like damn leave home boy alone for 5 seconds pls.