Come on. Make a second season. Flashbacks to their pregnancy, overall life, and those BABIESSS…
He isn’t any better than the ML. I honestly don’t care for any of them. lol The story is ok. I’m usually obsessed with at least one of the characters… but they are all mid.. giving me meh
I couldn’t imagine what is going through his head right now.. well on both sides.. I think he has so much trauma PTSD from his childhood and being abandoned that he just snapped. Him denying him was a trigger, like how can you not realize/recognize it’s me. Mido or whatever his name is. I forgot lol I read way too many at the same time… I’m not saying it’s ok, but I think that is what the author is trying to set as the tone/feelings…
Now the MC I truly feel bad for him. He holds so much guilt. But he is still invisioning some cute little omega. I don’t understand why he assumes they wouldn’t change.. he is being very naive. An omega out in the world alone. A small child, in general… it’s not safe.. thank god he ended up being an alpha but he has changed obviously. I’m sure he was raped or something that is why he has some much PTSD from his childhood. Overall this story is intense, a lot of misunderstandings, jumping to conclusions, and violence. It’s a bit much but I’m too invested now. So I’ll see it through.
Y’all being so dramatic… he wakes up in a 12 year old BODY but he isn’t actually 12. They have been together for years, he knows him inside and out. The ML tried to push him away but when he knows that much about him it’s kind of hard not to believe him…
i read only until chapter 3 so correct me if im wrong but he was 21 before he woke up again as an 11 year old. so let’s say they were dating for three years, that’s still a REALLY weird age gap (18 and 35). not only are they on vastly different stages in life, now the author is trying to romance an 11 yr old and a 28 yr old… regardless of how much the kid knows about him it is very strange that the ml would start liking him considering he does not remember their future relationship so he only knows the 11 yr old mc which means he is, in fact, a predator.
That may be uncomfortable to some, but legal age in the U.S is 18 years old. At the end of the day, that is on him to love someone who is older. Not everyone is weird and fetishized. Society today kills me with this kind of mentality. Lmao. The same people scream at the top of their lungs it’s ok to sell your body at 18. Be on OF. Sell your soul for money… use the excuse it’s there life and they are legal age… but oh no, how dare you be in a happy relationship with an age gap. Must be something wrong. Not everyone looks at meaningless things and judge. As long as they are two consenting ADULTS, then it’s not my place to assume anything in there relationship… you can be the same age and deal with toxic narcissistic people… I personally do not like dating too far from my age, but that’s just me. But I don’t care at all what others do.
it's 3 months not 3 years
He can’t help it if he doesn’t truly like him beyond being best friends.. it’s sad but there is someone out there for him.. can’t force feelings.. that is the one bad thing about being too close to your one sided love.. being friend zoned.. unless both sides are hiding it but when one is clearly opening in love.. it never works.. well 99.9% of the time.
I’m so mad that I didn’t find this sooner but then also I’m so happy I had sooo much to read.. you will not regret reading this cute story.. not too much toxic stuff.. just typical issues.
He shouldn't be the main character..not at all. He is way too emotional..can read him like a book. Can't hold his composure. How did he train in anything? He seems weak in mind and body. He is so aggravating. The ML is interesting..very interesting. Overall I'm excited to see what happens to him and how his story unfolds. I don't care about the "MC"
Yes exactly my thoughts
Why is being too emotional not fit for being the main character?
Because if you’re too emotional it gets old fast and very annoying.
Tbh the MC is delusional, you can’t expect the young innocent little kid to still exist.. I mean he is even working for the mafia and does terrible things? Why does he expect Mido who was suppose to be an Omega not have any hardships to twist and change that “bright light that radiated off of him”… come on? Get real.. and also Mido is obsessed also in his own way.. you kidnapped and raped him oh and turned him into an Omega, did you think he was gonna be sooo happy and forget all that happened so far? I don’t understand his reasoning for all the rape and violence, he wants to love him so I’m confused on it.. he is suppose to be so smart and a scientist, but he hasn’t come to terms that you wanted the MC to love and depend on him? Yes he didn’t keep his promise and your life fell into hardship, but he didn’t even ask the MC why he didn’t make it that day.. he wasn’t curious on why he was searching for him? Come on, common sense and a conversation… and all the misunderstands and nonsense could have been cleared up. Simple as that…
TLDR but I agree
A whole bunch of sex.. no personalities.. got hurt once and he is so pathetic and weak he allowed it to turn himself into a sex fene with no respect for himself… easily influenced with a big dick… WEAK.. this is just boring at this point.. no real storyline.. just two big dicks fighting over a pretty (somewhat) face and an asshole. Lmao. Why even like him? Cause of sexual chemistry. Nothing else. Ugh.
it's not by force for you to read it
sure but expect criticism lol
Exactly. I obviously know I don’t HAVE to read it lol but I can still critique it and have my complaints.. it’s the truth. You don’t have to read my rant also… but you did though…
do u mean to reply to me bc im literally siding w u
I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to reply to you. I just figured it would show up in the thread. And be in order. Sorry about that.