smut scenes r pretty nice and the plot is mildly messy. Theres a lack of fluidity in the panels, interrupting highlight moments and transitioning to the next scene too quickly.
I have a feeling that the author has a thing for message boards and is using them to convey story, which is definitely new. But I think it's not well fleshed out. All conflicting messages just make it seem confusing, rather than driving the story
smut scenes r pretty nice and the plot is mildly messy. Theres a lack of fluidity in the panels, interrupting highlight moments and transitioning to the next scene too quickly.
I have a feeling that the author has a thing for message boards and is using them to convey story, which is definitely new. But I think it's not well fleshed out. All conflicting messages just make it seem confusing, rather than driving the story