If you dont like the story just drop it, it was pretty clear its gonna be a wild ride from the beginning when the ML was fking her mom. ~ Sidenote, I've noticed that the few femdom manhwas there are, most have a toxic/ messed up personality FL. I guess thats what makes it interesting though lol, like the women gotta take the "mans" role and be rough and rude as shit for some reason
i think i prefer Adien with FL, Josh route seems like a mirrored story of Lia and Cedric. Adien with LiLi could’ve filled the “what could’ve been” storyline with Michael since OGFL was dead in the novel anyways.
Yes !!! I was routing for him too but i might be biased because I LOVEEE when childhood friends reunite again for the first time in years and its angsty. I was hoping theyd be endgame because he waited 9 whole years and remembered all the small details abt her :,)) this story would make a greatttt otome game hahaha
The brown hair guy name is Seong- hyeon he bullied the dark hair top back in hs, breaking his leg and almost blinding him. The reason being, Seong-hyeon the bottom didnt like how the top was looking at him in the bathroom after he was checking out the tops dick size and the top got a lil bricked. The tops name is unknown for a while since the bottom needs to figure it out to be unleashed from the app commands. The top is the creator of the hypnosis app and thus rich, the bottom has a rude superficial personality, so he gets lured by the top with fancy alcohol when they reunited. The bottom gets drunk and the top brainwashes him into being a cock slave. The top is doing this not to get revenge but because he loves Seong-hyeon even though he is a shitty person. The first conversation Seong-hyeon had with the top was on the day he was secretly going to kill himself, the bottom called his name and borrowed his money promising to give it back tomorrow. The top decided he wasnt going to die since people would suspect Seong-hyeon.
The novel has the main ending where Seong-hyeon marries the top since he couldn’t figure out his name in time. Following, theres side stories First night, Honeymoon, Newlyweds where they fuck a lot (not complaining tho). Then theres a “what if” alternative storyline, Seong-hyeon figures out the tops name, Ha-jin. The top lets him go and Seong-hyeon returns back to his regular life except his body can’t forget the huge ahh cock he had for months so he gets sexually frustrated. Ha-jin brainwashes Seong-hyeon to forget him so that they can meet at a blind date. Seong-hyeon gets jealous a couple times. This part genuinely gives me second hand embarrassment; Ha-jin talks about his first love after watching a romance movie, recalling how his crush never loved him back, Seong-hyeon gets jealous of his so called “first love” (AKA himself) and claims his crush had bad taste…. they fuck. Eventually Seong-hyeon remembers and wants to kill him with scissors but Ha-jin says i love you and by now Seong-hyeon is deep in the trenches and drops the scissors. After theres uniform side story where they…fuck in Ha-jin’s old uniform. Finally, a short flashback to when they were back in hs, Ha-jin was stalking Seong-hyeon’s SNS and they ran into eachother. Seong-hyeon asked Ha-jin to buy alcohol and as a gift for doing what he asked he handed him one of the chocolates and told him not to do anything dumb like dying. At the end Ha-jin wakes up from his dream and Seong-hyeon gives him chocolate since he looked like he had a nightmare. Ha-jin insists that it was a good dream and that he loves him. They say “i love you” to eachother at the end!










smut scenes r pretty nice and the plot is mildly messy. Theres a lack of fluidity in the panels, interrupting highlight moments and transitioning to the next scene too quickly.
I have a feeling that the author has a thing for message boards and is using them to convey story, which is definitely new. But I think it's not well fleshed out. All conflicting messages just make it seem confusing, rather than driving the story