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This story had so much potential, as it tells a story about how much a reliable tale from the past can change the future, making the premise itself feel kinda refreshing. But it's so badly executed, the writer has a good sense for humor and the characters are lovable, but the writing can't meet their own goals with consistency.
There are so much Diabolus Ex-Machina making bridges between the narrative, some characters turn dumb, others simply act out of their own making, in between leisurely telling us about the lead couple romance, critical shit happens. Ex.: Loretta managing to go every day to the fucking mage tower without anyone realizing, because a coachman (risking his own life to defy pretty plausible direct orders)?? Agreed and she, THE DAUGHTER OF THE DUKE I DARE SAY, ELEVEN YEARS OLD I DARE AGAIN, is allowed outside without a knight or a single servant. This whole arc is stupid as Claude is supposed to be "a genius" but can't see an inch before his face on the premise "oh me so in love". Loretta asking for magic infusion is yet another device, makes no sense, the explanation isn't good enough. And now the entire story will resolve to it's happy ending usando a DEUS EX-MACHINA in form of a "report of the past", as the writer fucked up so much making tragedies, they wouldn't be able to proceed without making a miracle.
I feel better now and I'm done with this shit.
The comments and discussions are so much better than the ones at official platforms. I do hope everyone can afford legal in their preferred languages and mingle someday, but I don't know if community wise it'll ever be that good.
Don't get me wrong, Ik we're not perfect. We *do* have the bad apples, god, sometimes I AM the bad apple, even if we disagree or cuss each other, when someone publishes/says something universally nasty, there'll always be ppl more people roasting em than agreeing.
Just wanted to say that.
I stumbled upon a manhwa where an "ugly" and bullied girl has a beautiful best friend. One day her best friend calls her in the middle of the night and when the protagonist gets there she finds her friend's dead body and somehow switch bodies with her. Need heeelp
But I'm still here because of the lack of overpowered female leads presented on action isekais