Okay so I just reread it. And I feel like it is a good idea of plot.I love it.However , I feel like there are some things that just don't work very well. Such as the ML being a psycho killer, yet feeling empathy for the MC when the MC describes his past, or acting like the priest is a lunatic, when he and the ML are the same in my book lol. Also, the MC has trauma from being tortured.Yet wishes to be killed by the ML and allows torture by him in a way. and grows attached to the ML. It feels a bit off, since he seems so afraid of it. At some points, it almost seems like he's excited by the idea of being killed, but he says it hurts, and he reacts in trauma response to the memories of being killed and tortured by the church in his past. Don't get me wrong.I really like the story, but when when you reread it almost feels like the author didn't think things through completely and things just don't seem to naturally work. This is my opinion, i still love it and will also continue reading.And I will stop thinking too deeply about it , and sorry for the writing , this was done in text to speech.
Hmmm I don't think that just because it's bl it's a pass for characters feeling out of character. I think it is okay to uphold a story to some kind of standard sometimes. Also, I am not expecting real life, heck there is literally an immortal being in this book. I was pointing out some incoherencies that I've noticed with the characters. I think I mightve offended you somehow with my previous comment.
Who knew my knowledge in bugs would help me get a reference in a bl smut scene. I don't think I'll ever see aphids the same
So aphids will feast on plants and excrete a sugary substance from their ass lol. The substance is very sweet and because of this ants tend to "farm" aphids. Basically, they treat them like cattle. They will protect the aphids and even move them to better places on the plant and then collect the sugary excretions
Just finished the raws and yea I'm removing this one from the list. I'm so fuking upset, ladies and gents don't waste your time and emotions.
Nope, obviously, as it's typically in series lately, of course it's not even adressed later, Gino is pissed because of betrayal in general, but that's all, and he's the one running after him to 'get him back', all we got is a pathetic scene when Dante is crying... after taht rape scene... like, seriously? Pathetic read, totally don't recommend










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