Am I the only one bothered by the fact that the "crowds" are so small? As in the author only draws 3-4 people as a crowd...same when drawing the war scenes. It looks so awkward. I know the author probably intends there to be more people, so like just add blurry figures in the background or something. It would make the things she is doing feel more impressive cause it would feel like it is involving and impacting more people.
Okay so I just reread it. And I feel like it is a good idea of plot.I love it.However , I feel like there are some things that just don't work very well. Such as the ML being a psycho killer, yet feeling empathy for the MC when the MC describes his past, or acting like the priest is a lunatic, when he and the ML are the same in my book lol. Also, the MC has trauma from being tortured.Yet wishes to be killed by the ML and allows torture by him in a way. and grows attached to the ML. It feels a bit off, since he seems so afraid of it. At some points, it almost seems like he's excited by the idea of being killed, but he says it hurts, and he reacts in trauma response to the memories of being killed and tortured by the church in his past. Don't get me wrong.I really like the story, but when when you reread it almost feels like the author didn't think things through completely and things just don't seem to naturally work. This is my opinion, i still love it and will also continue reading.And I will stop thinking too deeply about it , and sorry for the writing , this was done in text to speech.
Hmmm I don't think that just because it's bl it's a pass for characters feeling out of character. I think it is okay to uphold a story to some kind of standard sometimes. Also, I am not expecting real life, heck there is literally an immortal being in this book. I was pointing out some incoherencies that I've noticed with the characters. I think I mightve offended you somehow with my previous comment.











Has the ML ever apologized to the MC about the blackmail and threats? cause if not...tf is he waiting for?
Nope never.